A little short
Although this was a good flash game, I just fopund the plot way too linear and a little on the boring side. I've played games like Frank's adventure before, which this resembles in a few ways. This plot relied on getting one item to get another in straight sequence, not allowing you to go off and get other items in between.
Still, it's been well designed and put together, with all of the pieces working nicely in the end - did I hear the chime of Windows Live Messenger over one of the music tracks? If so, that's not very professional, ask your friends to fuck off for a bit when recording :P
Are you planning on sequels? This game did look as if it was only planned for the one shot stage, but I'm sure if you put your mind to it,. you can come up with more plot for Smithy and further (better) quests.
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