Glad you're improving
I've seen a lot worse, to be perfectly honest. There is little animation style, as the presentation is more of a slideshow (needs a forward button, I got bored waitng for it to flick to the next page) than anything.
The drawing is better than I could do, but that does not say very much. You need more practice with that and evein though you will reach EGSC soon, I fear your artistic skill will not progress enough to allow you to do that achievement justice.
Congratulations on your rankup though