Good tutorial, but a little basic
Don't get me wrong - everyone needs to start somewhere. I've been there before with different tutorials and have seen better set out examples. What I'd have suggested was that you show the audience a more expanded version, where individual frames, tweens or so forth are shown how to be made and incorporated.
An end product of the running cycle would have been nice to see, rather than just giving people the links to your productions set up for various versions of flash. You're not running out of space, why not have half of the screen showing your animation up until that part of the tutorial, as opposed to whoring out an advert, which I declined to click on the principle that you're trying too hard.
If you've not shown people how to tween or use other facets of the program, then educate them on those and link to other tutorials through some buttons that are available on certain parts of the tutorial. I'd work on the drawing of the buttons, just to make it look more polished and professional. The stick figure / mannequin can be tolerated, as we know that is a work in progress, but the button is something that should look tidy.
Tutorials are a great way to help other authors and hone your skills at the same time. Keep working on them and they will come good.
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