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[NG Audio Portal]

Great concept

This is a pretty awesome advert for the NG Audio Portal. The graphics encorporate the latest NG imagery. The music was a decent piece, well sourced from the Audio Portal, no doubt.

I like this piece and think that you've certainly got good skills and that you should take them further - do you have any projects in the pipeline?

[Review Request Club]

chillyphilly responds:

Thanks for the review...
I currently have many projects that im working on at the moment. A game, a few animtions, a website, projects for school and for work.
So I am incredibly busy, hopefully i will finish them in the near future.

[Dockatar: The random guy]

A little fast

This is a well done flash, though I think there are certainly areas where you can improve.

Yes, you could add subtitles - a small balck bar across the bottom of the screen and a regular white font doesn't take much, trust me.

Other than that, maybe you could slow the pace of the speech down, so that we can comprehend what is actually being said.

Still, you've done a great job on the graphics, so please take my comments on board and make the next installment in the series better for it.

[Review Request Club]

IZSBHR responds:

Thanks :)

- Subtitles... hmm...
- The speech is to fast?
- Thanks again :)

[Mohinder]

Interesting short

Due to the fact that this is only about 20 second long, it's not as good as your Blockhead flash. However, this is the sort of off the wall sort of thing I've come to expect from you over the past few months of viewing your work.

As always, the artwork is top knotch, the sound quality was good and the style / concept was quite amazing.

Where do you get your ideas from?

[Review Request Club]

The-Swain responds:

I certainly don't try to sell it as a Blockhead cartoon, that's for certain. In fact, this is my first non-Blockhead submission to NG. But it's been so long since I submitted anything due to the aforementioned reasons that I had try to offer at least -something-.

As for the idea, it came from the same place as most of my ideas: talking to myself. I was driving home from an arduous day of study and research, when I began speaking to myself as a Tarbash'esque Mohinder whilst sitting in traffic. It kind of went from there.

The sad thing is that if this cartoon had been longer than thirty seconds, I might not have ever bothered making it.

Also, thanks for the review! I was really uncertain of the response a toon like this would recieve :D Blockhead isn't all I know, but it's clearly all I've submitted.

[The Duders: Evolution]

Better already

This has proven everything I wrote in my last review... well, except for the plot thing, but this was only a short.

The graphics have improved and so has the sound (although no bad guy this time) I guess the next step is to make a longer movie, possibly in a series? Would you be willing to give us that gratification?

Still, keep on improving and good luck with your next project

[Review Request Club]

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks agian. Yeah I'm turning this into a series. I got alot of scripts and I'm workin' hard. Trust me you'll love The Duders series.

[The Duders: Emo Farm]

Work in progress

Well, your style lacks finesse, but there is certainly a few bits and pieces which you can refine over time. The animation isn't very fluid in my eyes and the sound quality is a little off in places. Personally, I'd suggest not using the voice like Foamy's as a bad guy, since he talked 3-4 times too fast for us to understand.

Still, the plot could be really good, if it's been fleshed out a bit, so don't be disheartened, just carry on and write some better material, I'm sure you'll learn some great techniques to make this a whole load better.

[Review Request Club]

TheCriminalDuder responds:

Thanks man. Yeah I'm not going to fix this one anytime soon. I've been getting better and better with each Duders flash. I'll keep this one to remind me how the duders original looked and to watch it for a pathetic laugh.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 1]

Not sure about the goth chick

I quite liked the animation you gave to Jim's legs here, as they looked really smooth (not that he shaves them, obviously). The misical jokes were pretty funny, but surely Goth chicks have dyed their hair black as well as goth men?

Still, aside from that confusion, I think you are learning how to use flash effectively and you're making a good go of it. Keep up the good work and let us know when there are more available

[Review Request Club]

Jimtopia responds:

Will do! Thanks for the review!