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[Bunnykill 3 Vol.2]

Amazing

This is the tip of the mountain once more, the Bunnkill series has certainly come on in leaps and bounds since it was first released.

Are we going to see Bunnykill 4 at all? I'd love to and I don't think you can really think about stopping making these awesome animations.

I think the only thing that you may find difficulty in is newer weaponry to give it a brand new twist. As for the theme, you seem to have borrowed heavily from Star Wars so far, are there any other Sci-Fi series you want to pay homage to?

I've always loved these flash and I'd dearly love to see more, although I can certainly appreciate the work that's gone into it and therefore how long we will have to wait for any possible Bunnykill Vol 4

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Mottis responds:

Thanks

Yes, I am planning on making Bunnykill 4, however since the stories have no connection to eachother I can change the theme and story.

The next Bunnykill will most likely be a Ninja-themed bunnykill.

[Mario In Windows III]

Look for positives

This one is really short, which doesn't make it a great ending for a series. Basically, you could have batched all three together into maybe 1 movie submission.

Having seen all 6 of your works so far, I am confident that you can do better now, but face it, you can now look back at this one and see where your faults lie.

Learn from your mistakes and go out there and give us what we want - quality flash, which makes us smile

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Dugh responds:

I know this is shit.. I lost the speciel feeling after I submited MIN 2.
I dont want to just stop the serie so I maked a part 3 fast and began practice FbF and other things.
(Im still very surprised over it not got blammed..)

[Mario In Windows II]

Getting better

You're on the learning curve and you've doing things right, which is great.

Sometimes you zoom in way too far on the sprites, which makes them look bad - sometimes the sprite artists keep it zoomed out as much as possible, to make the characters look as good as possible.

The Music was better for this one, but maybe a long track wasn't suited to a short film...

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Dugh responds:

I also think this is a little better than the other in the MIN serie, but I still think its very overrated!
3.38 I think? Its too much for some crappy little sprite movie.. ;)

[Mario In Windows]

Needs more detail

Taking a screenshot of your computer works great, if you can see the details right. I can't read what all of the icons say underneath and the icons themselves look like badly drawn sprites. If you fixed that, you'fd be up there with Animator Vs Animation.

Still, it's a nice start and a nice little idea you have here, keep working on it

Not sure about the music though...

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Dugh responds:

I know the picture detail suck, but the screen size was bigger than you see. (It got smaller on NewGrounds.. I dont know why?)
It wasn´t really maked for NewGrounds in the first place, but why not submit it anyway?

[Mario In Newgrounds III]

A lot of improvements

I quite liked this submission. Adding voices made a great addition to the whole thing. What I would suggest though is that you get someone who speaks English as a first language to just give your grammar a quick once-over, as there are a few errors creeping in there.

Now it's beginning to look a lot like Animator Vs Animation, which you seem to have borrowed heavily from, not that that's worth criticising, as it's a great thing to borrow from.

When I said about merging 1-3, forget that. Maybe merge 1 & 2, because compared to this, they are ridiculously short.

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Dugh responds:

Thanks, your review helped me alot! :D

[Mario in Newgrounds II]

A Little Short

I don't see why you've made this so short. Basically what I think you need is to put all three of the Mario in Newgrounds together, as I've seen movies last so much longer in here.

For me, it's just too shallow - I know that the characters of Mario etc have all been well established through the Nintendo series, but this series in itself really needs to have a little more to it. Why is there a sort of Animatior Vs. Animation scenario going on? How did that start?

Hopefully these qyuestions will be answered in part 3, but I need to see improvement.

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Dugh responds:

I know this is too short, but I could not wait submit it ;).
I think all the questions will be answered in part IV!
Remember to review it too when its out!
Now I will respons your other reviews =)

[Mario In Newgrounds]

Music File Too Large

Well, this looked impressive, as when I looked over the stuff before watching, the filesize does look quite large.

However, judging by the length of the movie, I can only conclude that it's the lenght of the music track - taylor it to your flash to make it smaller, maybe search the Audio Portal for tracks you can use.

I'd try using jingles to either 1) Differentiate between the characters or 2) show the emotions they are feeling, as it seemed to me that they could ahve conveyed this.

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Dugh responds:

Thanks for your review! :D