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[Jackson Runescaper]

You try too hard

Personally, I don't see the draw of animating poorly if you can do a better job of it. I could understand doing part of an animation that way to empathise a point, for example, but for the whole flash? That's going to make a lot of people think that you just put the disclaimer in to convince people not to laugh at your lack of talent.

Still, the jury is still out on that one.

It's Michael Jackson jokes, which although this flash is reasonably old, doesn't mean it hasn't been done before. Topical jokes age, sadly, which is probably what can also be said about this one, even though it's only about 6 months since the flash was made. I think you need to jump on the bandwagon quicker if you want a better reaction.

What more can I say, but use your talents and produce a decent collab flash work.

[Review Request Club]

kirbynator responds:

This was my first flash. Sorry. Wolfinator-x is thinking of doing a remake with good graphics.

BTW, these graphics were actually also made on purpose to look stupid AND funny (a bit like Jerry Jackson)

[Cow on Trampoline]

3D was good

I'd say you could do with studying the mechanics of how a trampoline works. I know it may be getting a little technical, but if you understood that better, then maybe the animation would look a little better. Put some springs around the edge - they stretch, not the fabric of the tarpaulin.

When the cow jumps, make more than just his knees bend, as if he's really putting some effort into getting into space. Arms, hips and knees should all be moving. These little touches would make it so much better.

Also, a better sound effect for the trampoline itself and maybe a slightly quieter music track.

Other than that, it'snot going to set the portal ablaze, but it'll certainly be a passable flash animation.

[Review Request Club]

Imacow responds:

Thanks for the review.

The trampoline animation wasn't as realistic as possible. I should of made for limbs moving.

I liked the sound effect =[

The music was a little loud.