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[Hazardous Materials dÜb]

A little repetitive

Sure, there is variation in this piece, but it's not quite enough for my liking. Don't get me wrong, you've put some in there, but the problem that occurs is that the parts that do loop, making up the individual components of the piece just seem to drag on for a little longer than needed.

I think that you're a very capable artist and that this can certainly go far, though I'd ask you to take a step back, listen to it and see if you can take a few repeats of each loop and maybe add another different set of loops in there, to alter the sound and the dynamic of the track.

The combinations that you chose were good and those high synths that you brought in around the minute marker were good, so I'd suggest using them later in the track.

I've heard dubstep a lot worse than this, so don't stop making it. I think you may be better suited to other genres, such as house and trance, but if dubstep is what you want to do, then go for it.

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ThunderHorseL responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism! I always appreciate a finely tuned ear. All of the songs I post here on Newgrounds are rough mixes. I'm never done polishing my tracks, so somewhere down the line I will fix and edit when final mixing and stuff is done.

-IoN bLaStA

[ARES - Dodson's Warning]

Needs a little something

Big vocal samples add to the variation in the early stages of the track and while this does add flavour, it doesn't showcase your own work. That part is repetitive and a little tacky, lacking in the all important variation and just giving us a step beat, that is something to walk along to.

Later in the track, when the vocals are taken out, this does work better, but by then, the damage has been done and I think that you'd gotten a little up-tight on it all. Perhaps experiment with a few instruments, perhaps a part of the track, where you change the pace, to see if something faster works in nicely. Music is a way of expression and at the moment, it seems like you want people to view you as slightly boring.

Take this track, change a few things - some major, some minor and let's see what sort of journey it takes you on.

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BulimicLemur responds:

Cheers, I'll try to take that stuff into account. Thanks for the review!

ARES

[Silv3Ster - God Damn Robots]

Driven

Not bad, but a little repetitive - I did like the vocal sample from C&C Music Factory's Everybody Dance Now, though this is hardly a tune to dance to.

The beat drives hard and fast and the melody is complimented (if that's the right word) with a lot of additional sounds and perhaps even the occasional instrument. I'd probably rather have heard something a little more musical, but the use of the sampling does give a unique selection of sounds to use, abuse and otherwise alter to your own satisfaction, before mashing it all together.

It's not mainstream Electronica and, while with a degree of trepidation, I'd quite like to heard more of your stuff, to see what else I can pick out from there.

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Dj-GST responds:

This was an experimental piece on my part, I was trying to write something out of the ordinary, I guess it worked, haha.

Yeah man, I did alot of hours of sample work, it took some rather large tweaking to get the sound I wanted.

Sweet man! I should have more stuff up soon, I'm currently working on a remix.

Thanks for the review!

3S

[Sir Sirius - Electrostep 2.5]

I might get to like this...

Okay, so the formula of this track is relatively simple, for the most part, with a repeating melody loop, which then gets something else added on after one cycle, like a game of Buckaroo. Then, everything stops and you put in the "intrinsically dubstep" sound of the distortions and it takes a little away from a fantastic sounding track, for my liking. Rinse and repeat, in modulation, so that the second pass through sounds different enough, but still quite similar.

I love the first minute of this track and think that it would be better suited to dance, trance or techno. After 1.15, when the distorted bass line came in, it wasn't as special to me, so that needs working on, possibly because I'm not a fan of dubstep.

While the formula for this track appears basic, it's certainly effective and you've made a very good track out of it at the end of the day. To improve, aside from a slight change of style (and therefore genre), I'd also suggest that you try to make a different solo, as the end of the two "verses" could benefit from a solo that sounds different, as the rest of the track sounds just a little too similar, to cut away like that.

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[Shadow of Fate [collab]]

Short, but hard hitting

I think that there's a well designed piece of music in here, but it's not quite where it needs to be. Perhaps a little more length and even a smidgeon more flutes, where you can use them to be the lighter side better - they quickly get drowned out by the entire percussion section of the orchestra, so the balance is ever so slightly off.

On that front, with the percussion, the kettle drums being rolled would be a nice addition, to compliment the strings and bring it all together nicely.

If I were to interpret the piece, I'd say it sounds like preparations for a battle, but from the point of view of a massively outnumbered force - rebels or the remnants of a previously defeated force, wanting so much to live through the conflict that is to come, so that they may get the chance to visit loved ones, that have been left behind at home, many miles from there.

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samulis responds:

Thanks for the critique. I see what you mean about the flutes... might try remastering it later. The drums idea might work.

I like the interpretation... much better than anything I could have thought up. :)

Thanks again,
-Samulis

[Out In The Cold]

A little quiet, but evocative

Wow, this piece can certainly stir up some emotion in me, with the way that the intro is so softly "spoken" and the feeling I get is either one of lamenting the fallen comrades, or that it is regret over something not being done that should have been in the story.

A good use of the piano, though a little too quiet for a piece so poignant and you should consider making the higher pitched notes from this wonderful instrument that little bit louder, since the lower notes have no such issue.

I wonder if someone could find a piece of writing and use this as a backing track for their reading of it? The piece certainly has potential and if the piece were right, along with the reader, perhaps this could come off!

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bearskin responds:

Thanks for the review!

[Chase Within]

A little repetitive

I think that as the piece sounds to be a few slight variations on a theme, there is something slightly wrong with the tune. The form is decent and it could stand a little more power in the bass stakes, to give it that extra boost, but the real issue lies with the melody, which needs to change a bit more than this, to catch my attention.

As far as the track goes, it's a little short, but it sounds alright. Don't think that I'm being overly negative by saying it needs more in the variation to make it grab more attention, but the length might also come into question there. Give it an additional minutes, maybe another minute and a half, to cure some of the variation issues (hopefully) and you'll be laughing.

Consider a counter melody, to perpetuate the piece and "talk" to the melody, so that they duel and then give the counter a solo, before coming back in with the melody, to finish things off, that should see you right.

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The-iMortal responds:

Thanks for the review, Coop. Yes, it is definitely short as I was running out on time for the Audio Secret Santa thingo, lol. Cheers.

[House above the clouds]

A little too wide ranging

Don't take my vote of 3 as totally negative, I really don't think it deserves to be as high as it was, especially if you're voting to inflate your own scores up so high.

Right, onto the track itself - there are lots of different video games represented in this particular creation and, while I can see it getting some good mileage in this arena, you may have covered too many generic video games to really get ahead here - why not pick a tune and redux it Tetris style, or create Super Mario Brothers Vs. [popular artist of today], for example?

I think that your quirky style is worth something here and that you can develop it a little more than you already have, perhaps by making the track a full three - three and a half minutes long, as at half that length, it becomes a little tiresome and boorish, without too much in the way of form over the variation. Even with this variation, it can become repetitive, so keep working at it.

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ErlendHL responds:

Hmm why are there lots of video games represented in this song? I haven't played any of the old video games and this I made up by playing the piano while chiptuning.
You're right it can be longer, with another part. Right now it does have ABA and variation but they are pretty similar. Thanks for the review.
Edit: Hmm and when you say a little too wide ranging, I can't see what you mean :/
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[Invasion (DJ Razz)]

Good pace, but why Dubstep?

I thought it was going well, until the trademark sounds of Dubstep came in, to be brutally honest. This is a nice sounding piece, with a nice, if slightly basic beat, coupled with a serviceable melody - nothing spectacularly good, but then again, nothing spectacularly bad, either.

The sound distorted parts changed all of that, as it took away some of the magic of the track for me. The intro came in, almost in the same way that When the Wild Wind Blows, by Iron Maiden does, with a breeze blowing in a calm, almost carefree manner. With this, you kept recycling this simple sound, which is nice and natural - the artificial stuff needs some work, to tidy their sounds up, make them more crisp and better work out where they belong in the tune.

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RobinDB responds:

Hey, thanks for the review, but I'm not entirely sure what you want me to change. And sorry for making it dubstep, i guess...? But thanks for appreciating the intro wind effect.