Hmm, a well received and laid out piece, the start is better than the end, in my opinion, because I'm just not a fan of the "whum whum" noise that these tracks seem to generate, as if they are an electrical generator on the fritz.
Therefore, the first minute was brilliant and the rest of a the track dragged it down. Yes and no would be my answer, because while it did reflect poorly on the track, it wasn't a complete death-knell for the piece. The light and airy feel to the track stayed in abundance and came back to take over from those sounds which didn't feel like they dominated as much as I had first feared they might.
I'd like to see you do more with creativity on the side of the higher melody, as opposed to the bass / counter that comes along,a s I feel that there is more potential to be extracted from there. In that, I can wish you the best of luck, perhaps in finding new instruments to try out, or some other way to make this track better, without compromising on the overall sound and the genre choice.
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