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[The Death of Mozilla]

More detailed...

...Than your other Clock Day entry, I'll grant you. This one was too damned short, but it did have some endearing points:

The characters were detailed nicely - not over the top, like some artists this year and at least you have made an effort. The pitch of Speakonia was changed, so that each clock who spoke had a 'different' voice. Both of these are definate boons for your piece.

I know you've got creative talent, so start now with your 2008 piece! Put some effort in and come back to us next year with something based around that awesome camera pitch that you had. Maybe with a plot, we'll be onto something worthy of note in the collection!

[Review Request Club]

FattyWhale responds:

yeah, I really should have put more time and plot into a movie next time. I just don't like Flash that much!

[A Clocktime Story]

Random Clock Day Madness

Well, as usual, it's a poor flash that gets voted up to about 4 by the masses. Still, I'm not here to criticise that (much)

The drawings of the Clocks for me weren't detailed enough, as they were so small. Make them a little bigger and zoom in when you draw to get more control of your drawing implements.

What I'd also suggest is that you don't just use one speakonia voice - use one for the narrator, then one also for each character, so you get more of a feeling of the story, rather than a rushed children's tale, as this came across.

See you next Clock Day

[Review Request Club]

FattyWhale responds:

watch clocks adventure of love. That's why I made this

[lice vs crabs trailer!]

Sweet Jesus!

I'm so glad this is never coming to a browser near me! That' is one sick idea.

Aside from the obviously repulsive connotations of the subject material, I'll try to sum up the better points:

You did draw the crabs and the lice quite well - not sure why you made the lice look like centaurs, but it's not really important. I'd still reccomend zooming in, to make the drawing more detailed... also, but a tablet, it'll make things much better in the long run. I think you should have spent less time with the gratuitous picture of some guy wanking as well - perhaps make him just a topless guy, looking down his shorts or something...

[Review Request Club]

Bluemidgetguy responds:

The concept just kind of came to me. I laughed for about a month straight. This was one of my first so it's obviously not great. Concept is better than the art and animation.

Are you gay? All my flash movies you review you have to complain about the cocks - I think you have homophobic issues and you may be gay. You could easily say I'm gay and you're half right - but being so up tight, I bet you complain because when you see the cock, you get a boner and it makes you angry inside that your leading towards the male.

lol.

[House of Clocks]

More Clock Madness

Will this never stop? For the moment, yes, but we've always got another Clock Day come next year, I suppose.

At the offset, it looks like a really good flash, the way you focused in on Clock Day 07. Unfortunately, then it went rapidly downhill. The clock pictures look out of focus, poorly cut out and in the instance of the ninja-assassin thingy, poorly drawn. At least Speakonia worked well :P

Not too sure why you used Blue Moon as your chase music, but well, who am I to argue with an artist?

[Review Request Club]

Frenzy responds:

Lol, I wanted to use the Benny Hill Theme, but it took up to much file space, and I didn't want the filesize to be too big. Happy Clock Day!

[Super Clock Dance Party!]

Very Basic Loop

I'm not impressed with this submission at all. The music really is the only endearing part of the flash, while the loop looks like something that you spent very little time preparing.

I've come to expect more from you, as you have proven that you can animate, but this looks like very little time and effort was put in, as you are safe in the knowledge of a high score, due to Clock Day.

I'm not picking on you, I just feel that more effort would be called for.

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Imacow responds:

Yea this was just a short clock day flash.

Thanks for the review.