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[weird al: ....hamsters]

Only half the song

You've gotten off to the right start here - the animation's not exactly the best I've ever seen, but it's making good progress with the hamsters.

I'd say you really need to concentrate on the drawings of your band - zoom in closer, to give you greater control over the drawing implement and then you can come up with a neat basic outline. Look at the Madness series and see the faces - the cross is what you should use before putting the eyes on and you can use a similar horizontal line for the mouth. I'd give them a different colour than greay as well.

Since it's Weird Al, why not look for images of him and try to animate your own Al?

I'm really looking forward to seeing what this would look like if you finished the song :)

[Review Request Club]

flashfrog responds:

ok i will

[SBC's Missing Watch Pt. 1]

Needs more

More of everything really - The traditional way of indicating a clock is talking is the kite-shaped icon which wobbles in time with the speech. I think it would make the animation look a whole lot better than making the characters wobble for the same purpose.

It needs finishing. After all, you've only produced 450k of file, so leaving it like that doesn't really qualify it as a full episode, with SBC being a spoilt brat and fucking with Banana's yo-yo.

I know it feels a little bit like desperation, trying to submit the file quickly, but if you could hold back for a week or two, you would be able to get a quality piece submitted, with better reviews and a higher score.

When will you have the next episode ready?

[Review Request Club]

xILK responds:

The next episode will be arriving A.S.A.P. I cannot guarantee better graphics, for I am not that good of an artist in flash. However, I will try my best to improve the graphics, and I will change the talking to the kite shaped object. The next one will be longer, please not the first was just the beginning to find out what is going on.

[Field of honor]

I jumped the wrong way

I thought that they'd both drop, which would have been an adequate punchline for such a poeticly laid out piece. I loved the detail on the sillouettes, especially the fly :)

It just goes to show what a good background colour selection can do for an animation such as this.

Good work, I'm looking forward to seeing some of your other pieces.

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MarkArandjus responds:

Boy do I love the review request club ^__^

Thanks! And strangely enough I'm really glad peopel notice that lil fly, it's the the icing on a donut, the cherry on teh cream, the lil extra mile =P

Also I'm honored you like the composition, I have since always believed simplicity will prevail over complacancy :P

[Tetris Unleashed 3]

You've come a long way

This flash is by far and away your best effort to date - I love the way you've used the Tetris blocks for the various plot elements (Tetris surfing rocks!) and also the music.

You've really thought about this and while the animation proves that every instalment shows Jim is evolving, you've still amnaged to give us plotlines which are relatively simple and quite deep also (Four! What a genius!)

Certainly better than a Mario Parody, are there any other games you like?

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Jimtopia responds:

Thanks for all the compliments Coop83! I'm so glad you see that you liked this cartoon, and thanks for being so supportive! Anyway, in response to your question, I'm basically a fan of all retro style games.