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[<==Raining Rage==>]

Suspenseful

This sounds like one of those tracks that gets played as a backing track for when the bad guy is revealing certain key plot points to the characters prior to the main boss fight, then we get the big fanfare and all fire battle for survival that usually follows in these games.

I think that you could make it into a loop, which would be much better for the state of inclusion in a movie, as sometimes the boss does tend to get full of himself and go on for a little longer than this.

A very good use of the low chords and also with the blend of the keyboard in the background.

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DjCompass responds:

Ooh, i like that image. However, i'm not a particularly loopy person, so i doubt if i'll be making one. But if someone wants a loop of this song, feel free to contact me, and it will be done.
Thanks for the review.

[(prev.) ChromoMiyx]

Take it further

It's a decent start, but I think that you could add things to it - other sounds from the keyboard would be nice, possibly an electric piano sound, to solidify the melody, rather than the beat and the rhythm that you've got here.

A stronger bass beat would also help, but be careful not to overdo it - that would be so easy to do with a track of this kind of softness.

Also, fix the looping issue, it would be much better then.

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loogiesquared responds:

~it's a preview, so that'll happen, THNX~

[[TMM43] Breathe]

Good mix, slow buildup

This is a good mix, although it is a shame that it takes such a long time to build up - I kept feeling that it was going to go to another level of tempo and depth. When it didn't, I was a little dissapointed, but that's the way that the composer took it...

I'd have added a bit more to the bass department, as the uniform beat is nice, but a bridge where you changed the beat around, would have been nice - I did note the one where you increased it to 2x and then 4x speeds, but I was hoping for something more advanced to be honest.

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[(_RGH_) Aero(on a plane) ".(."]

Not bad

This one has more good potential, but I think that the bass needs toning down slightly - it gets a slight static style feedback coming through my speakers and i haven't changed for the other stuff I've listened to, which is fine.

The length and variation are nice, allowing the listener to stay focussed, while at the same time staying within the constraints of the original concept.

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RyeGuyHead responds:

Yea I'm gonna upload a remastered version tonight, thanks

[(_RGH_) Abyss (Dark Pico)]

Good tune

Though it takes alittle while to get going, this is a nice piece of work. A little light on the pace and beat for techno, but I think you've got a good start in this genre in all honesty.

I think that your best bet for improvement is to knock up the tempo and possibly add a more powerful bass beat - let the tune mark its authority on the world of Techno.

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RyeGuyHead responds:

off beat bass would probably work...

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend 3]

Are you Jason?

So we've seen some improvement, compared to Jason I, there are some issues with the feedback in the first few seconds of the track that I'd really take some time to tidy up, as it will make the instruments sound a lot better.

As for the lyrics, they are so perverted and wrong, that they make Eminem look like a church going prude. You've got some issues and I think that you really need to take some time to come up with something that suits this type of music, rather than going on about wanting to suck a guy's titties.

Failing that, pass the metal tunes that you've created on to friends and get them to come up with some lyrics for you and that would certainly help - they aren't your strong point, so outside help may be neccessary.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

YOU ARE JASON! DONT YOU KNOW THAT BY NOW!?!?!?!?!?! FAGGOT!

[Jason Needs A Girlfriend]

Yeah...

I'm sure the music was good in the background, but I couldn't hear it too well, due to the random Tourette's Syndrome yelling in the foreground. If you're going to try 'singing' like that, step back from the mic and try to carry the tune.

If it was Rap, try to make the words sound a little poetic and keep time with the beat, as this bears no relevance to the music that is struggling away in the background.

I'd consider adding drums to the tune itself, as that would make it more imposing, especially with the power chords that you've used here.

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KlanMaster911 responds:

YOU NEED TO FIST FUCK YOUR MOMMYS ASS THEN YOU NEED TO THROW HER SHIT RIGHT DOWN YOUR FUCKING THROAT WHILE YOU ASS FUCK YOUR DADDY.

[Fantasia Nocturne No.2]

Not a bad solo

Not sure why, but this one sounds a little on the muted site, as if the pianist is quite some distance from the mic. Maybe a little remastering could help with this. I'd reccomend that you speak to someone like Jurian, who is a master at Piano and probably with converting them to audio files as well, since he puts his own work on NG in the same way.

I think that this tune sounds less joyous, compared to the first part. I think it is more reminiscent of the cassanova, who tried, but failed to woo his chosen lady this evening and now he laments, folornly.

There is always next time. Who knows.

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sarias responds:

um omg you nailed it perfectly your the only one to get it right, :D you have a good ear and thanks for the advice, but accually xKore is accually working on it for me at the moment, i kept getting the same review that the muffled sound took away from it so i asked him to help since he did the first one, so i should be up in a day or so i'll let you know when that happens but thanks for the review

[Fantasia Nocturne No.1]

Cinderella goes to the ball!

A nice piece, certainly consistent with these big lavish partys thrown by aristocratic types. Possibly with something more sinister lurking in the background as well, but we can look into that at a later date.

I like the way that it plays out, the beat is nice and it sounds as if it would lend itself quite well to a string quartet accompanying the piano, just to add a little more life to the proceedings.

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sarias responds:

again you are good at this, your not exact this time but your close, its about a guy who is all alone, but then he meets this girl where he instantly falls in love with at first sight, but there is a guy lurking who is also in love with this girl, so he kidnaps her, and he chases after them, but he is too late, becasue he has forced her to marry him against her own will, but he atlast saves her in the end, in a duel to the death where he wins

[Town Theme Loop]

Link's home

Simple, effective, quaint. This reminds me more of the sort of tunes that you expect to find in LoZ games or Simon the Sorcerer, from the country houses. Excellent, as there aren't enough of them in the world :)

I think you can take this further by developing other themes that go with this sort of settings, such as the market theme, boss theme and castle etc. This could certainly lead to you taking it further when someone comes after a few for a game or movie project.

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sarias responds:

i cant figure out if you like it out not because you make it sound like you hate it terrible because im no the first person to make a town theme, im not sure if you like it out not tell me that. i wasn't the first person to make a town theme, but nither was pokemon, or neither was zelda, and they didn't get sarcasm thrown at them