Fast paced
I think that the only problem that a track of this speed posesses is that it's going to finish way too soon, so you need to loop it and do that well.
I'd consider making the track longer to counter-balance the speed making it sound shorter and also the addition of something a little more varied into it - there are maybe 4 phases in this song and I think that you need more, even if you come up with variants of these parts.
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It's hard to explain, but...
It was originally supposed to be way longer, but near the end all of the synths I used using the nexus demo went silent, and I had to find substitutes. The only one that didn't go silent was that saw-type synth that came in around 0:21, and that was the only thing that kept me from giving up on it. I ended it earlier because I was afraid that if I waited longer, that one would go silent, and being the most important synth in the song, I didn't want to take my chances of spending even more time on a song that would end up not working.
Last time I'm using the Nexus demo...
Not my thing...
I think that you need better casting for the part of Hugh Heffner, plus a more excitable script. It's been done before and let's face it, would need a better script to be done again.
Of course, the whole breaking into that dumbass lines that I was totally expecting ruined it. Get a life and make something worthwhile with your software. Please.
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YOUR THING IS DICK SO NO WONDER YOU WOULDNT LIKE THIS! FAGGOT!
Lose the vocal effects
If you just turned the sound of the voice down a few octaves, rather than tried to mess around with it, you'd have a much better sounding tune.
The guitar that you've put in sounds good, if a little repetitive, although I am distracted by this nagging feeling at the back of my head from listening to the assault on my senses from the vocals.
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Lose the fagness before you get stomed. Some one who voice acts shouldnt judge shit. FAGGOT!
Evocative
A nice piece here, with a good variation of tempo and ambient sounds. This could well be something associated with either the Final Fantasy Genre or indeed something as a menu backing tune on quite a wide range of games.
In reflection of this last point, I'd hope that it would loop better for that, but we can't have it all, can we?
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Walking on fresh snow...
... looking over an icy paradise of untouched countryside on a bright sunny morning. It's perfect.
That's just the problem, it's too perfect for this to be a reality - I'd suggest that you add something in there to accompany the niceties of the orchestra - something like a little percussion or some woodwind to signify birds... something to give a little activity to the piece.
Otherwise, it sounds a little 2-D for my liking.
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All of my other pieces are the exact opposite; sad and mournful. This is really an exception. :P
I definitely see what you are saying though. The limited number of instruments does put a limit on the pieces activity. However, I had a specific goal in mind with this. I wanted to see how I could create variety using only a limited instrumental pallet and a very simple form utilizing three simultaneous melodies. I did try to create some variety with the string arpeggios later on, combining and strings and woodwinds, etc.
Thanks for the review,
~Blaze
Good tempo
I like the way that you've put this track together, giving us a nice impression of someone being hunted and having to run for their lives.
Perhaps a slower part would be called for, when the chasee finds somewhere to hide and recover his breath, before suddenly gettingf spotted and having to run hell for leather again?
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Dreams can differ...
This one is unlike any dream tune that I've ever heard. It's moredark and mysterious, so it could be a nightmare, if you toned down the melody and gave us something a little more sinister, methinks.
I think that another thing to improve this track would be to slow the tempo down just a smidgeon, if you're looking for sinister, that is - evil things tend to lurk in the darkness and wait for the time to strike...
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One of the main intruments didn't export properly and I've only just realised, I think the sinister-ness relies on it!
Thanks for your review
Hmm
I'd be giving this more stars if you'd added some more variation to the bass beat - it's quite dull on that token and I'd like to hear if you can offer us something different. A break in the middle of the melody, to allow the bass to take over for a little while would certainly add to the variation of the track and would allow the bass to shine through.
Otherwise, the tune gets a little samey. Maybe tone down the volume of the melody, as it's quite dominant at present.
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Good tunage
I think this one could be a hit in clubs if you added some sultry vixen's vocals over the top, just for about 6 lines that you can throw into the song to give the saleability of this track a nudge in the right direction - people are more likely to buy a track if they sing the lyrics, plus it gets passed on easier.
Still, for Techno, you don't really need lyrics, but this could cross quite easily into the realms of mainstream trance as well.
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Yeah but I don't have a mic and i'll have to use one of those robotic things, and they suck P: Thanks for tah revyew!
Strut your stuff!
It sounds like a high class hooker walking along here, but then it becomes more of a club scene almost instantly, as she passes her bag to a minder and starts dancing provocatively on the floor, before walking around the club, sneering at the less wealthy clientelle.
That's how I saw it anyway. I'd have turned the volme down on it slightly, as it's a little rough around the edges.
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Ahaha! Nice image! I'm glad to hear that your seeing more than just a silver road like i got XD
I mainly used 3xOSC, so ya, it is a little rough around the edges. Why must all the good synths cost money that i don't have (yet...)? Oh well.
Thanks for the review ^^
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