Good bass
I would like to see you take this further, by adding other instruments to it. Given that it's a pure piece of bass and a little additional percussion, you've got little to do to that and adding a melody would certainly take it a lot further.
I think that this piece sets the bar quite high, so expectations will be running high for your next tune ;)
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Vocal Sample
I think that you've produced a simple loop that even someone like me could get away with for the purposes of the Audio Portal. All it sounds like is someone remonstrating loudly into the mic.
I'd have appreciated this to be combined with music, as that's the real beauty of the Audio Portal and the great stuff you can find there. I'm fortunate to feel that I'm not the only one who feels this, judging by the score of this piece.
Of course, when you've added music to this piece, you'd need more vocal samples to take it further. Keep experimenting and give us something else to review.
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Alright.
Hmm
I think that for your next piece, you need to come up with some sort of song with substance. This just seems like a random collection of sounds, with no real direction. The reason I gave you 3 stars was because some of the sounds did actually sound good. Take those, like the metal guitar riff and build on them
Once you've got that as the basis for a tune, expand on it, so that you've got something that wouldn't just be miscelaneous, for example...
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To you?
Sorry, but I can get a better price elsewhere. This piece isn't the best I've heard by a long shot. You need to concentrate on adding other things to the tune, rather than a dodgy little vocal sample.
Beat. Melody. Counter-melody. Those are the three things that you need to produce to make a nice sounding tune. You need to work on those three, before you consider trying to add the vocal samples to the piece.
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I dont know what melody I can add.
It sounds fine as it is.
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Good
A good use of the beat, melody and counter melody. I'd have considered adding a further variation to the track itself, as it's only like three pieces blended together. I think the piece deserves more than that.
If you could add something more, like maybe a gap in the beat, to show off the melody in a different light, you'd add a new facet to the tune itself.
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Too light
You've called this the song of storms, but it's too high pitched to seem like a story weather style tune. I think that you'd need to go an octave or two lower and maybe add some bass to represent something like Thunder and Lightning.
This seems more like wheat fields blowing in a summer's breeze, surrounding a mill, which is spinning slowly, grinding the wheat into flour, which gets taken away to the bakers. The smell of fresh bread and the relatively simple task that produce it.
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You see, the reason it is at that register is because that's how it's played in the game. And even though it is named Song of Storms, do you know why it is also called Windmill Song? Because it does give the feeling of a windmill, since the person who plays it (in game character) does it inside a spinning mill.
Thanks for the review :)
Quiet Buildup
This track takes too long to get started for a Techno track - it's far too quiet at the start, once the first beat has subsided, it's about another 10 seconds before anything else happens. At least after that, there is variation, which you certainly need on a track of this length.
A good combination of beat and melody have been utilised well enough to get the tune working, but again, the fade out was far too much. If you'd cut in the middle of the fade, when you can still hear it, it would sound so much better.
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Dramatic Crescendo
What a great introduction to an epic this is going to be. I can sense the whole tune making for an excellent flash production - do you have the means and drive to take it that far?
As any good overture should be, this is a blend of tunes that will eventually consitute the score for something larger, so you would need to make about 4 or 5 different tunes, which you could try presenting to us in their individual formats. I would love to hear them and pass comment on them myself.
Are they all based around war? It seems like we've got a build up and then a sudden die down of the tune, that's my only real issue, as it causes the mind to wander between the parts. Something that could keep my mind on track would have been more effective there.
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Yes, I do have the means of turning this song into a flash movie, Also, I am making a TESIV: Oblivion mod for my story.. As for the individual songs based from this overture, I already have made the "Vulpus Public" theme, and the "TGF War" theme I submitted also carries this melody in parts. Esentially, the story is about some characters preparing their nation for a massive scaled war. This overture is about the nation of Vulpus, one of the places the characters stop to get some reinforcements.
Not Quite Drive Time
Still a good tune, but I wouldn't consider playing this tune while I'm driving, as it could cause some errors of judgement. Not that I don't like loud music, but I just feel that this is made for heavy duty racing games - things involving monster trucks, tanks and the like.
Good use of the guitar to sound a little Joe Stariani-esque, but I'd suggest that you try some of the more improvised things he tries, like the whammy bar and a few pedals to take this song forward.
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Good rhythm
Sounds a little too Man'o'War for me to really enjoy :P Other than that, it's a great tune, with really great guitar solos and a well developed all around tune.
I'd consider taking away the drums all together when playing the guitar solo though, as they are quite loud on this edit. Either that or find some way to fade them out a little more.
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