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[HIT ME Organ Donor]

Sounds like a Honda track...

This sounds like a track that should be on a Honda commercial to start with. I'm expecting a voiceover to come on about the latest technological development in Honda's quest for comfort in a world where we yearn for environmentally friendly surroundings as well.

It's a really well put together piece - plenty of variation and the range of instruments is great. You could cut this into segments and use it for different rooms within a game, they are so detailed.

Of course, you'd need to have a game or movie that would do the piece justice, I suppose...

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[DKC- Ice Cave Chant Slow Mix]

I like this

Love the way that you've got the 'icicle sounding' twinkles, which work really well for the imagery of an icy cave. I get the feeling that there's something flying taking me through this cave, on a sort of fly on the wall style entrance. This tune could easily be used in some sort of Final Fantasy style game to represent a safe haven, as it's got that homely quality about it

I'd have made it just a little longer and added a little more variation to it, just so that it maybe conjures up other images for the listener as well.

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[.:Sweeping Through Life:.]

Hmm

I think there's one duff note in your backing track. It just sounds a little out of key, so a little tweak there would improve the track greatly. The problem with the track being one long loop of the backing track doesn't really help the situation, but I will say that the melody makes a good effort to disguise it.

I loved the high end piano towards the end of the tune. A nice variation on the theme and it really added another level to the track. I still think that for a 3 minute track you are lacking a little variation. Maybe something changing around the backing to liven it up a little?

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[Final Moment (Alex Sandford)]

Sounds a little Metallica

The start of the tune sounds very much like Nothing Else Matters by Metallica, but it soon changes into something different. Congratulations to you and Alex for putting together a great sounding tune.

The only thing I'd do is tone down the bass a little, as it tends to drown out the lead guitar a little too much. It's a fine balance, I'll be the first to admit, but just a fine tweak would make this tune a very nice addition to anyone's iPod.

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Naitzmic responds:

You might be right about the bass.
I'll keep it in mind next time.

If anyone indeed put this song on their iPod,
we'd be thrilled to hear about it.

Thanks!

[-rT- Nexus]

Consistent

This tune has a good beat and a decent blend of sounds, leading me to believe that it's a well balanced tune.

You've put together a good mix, but I think that you really let the track down by not having enough variation. I know that Dance tracks on the whole don't really lend themselves to the philosophy of variation, but if you get enough variation into the track and make that into one big loop within the track, you've got yourself a solution to the issue.

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[Dreamwalker]

Light headed

I think that the track does have the potential to be something great here, but you've got some issues with it sounding a little messy. There's some sort of piano virtuoso going on over the rest of the track and they just aren't blending well together.

To be honest, the sound of the piano should be dominating and the beat should be faded down slightly, allowing the power of that instrument call the beat of the track. Modify the beat so that it conforms and then you've got a better sounding track. I don't think that it's worth sacrificing the piano for, as it's such a defining sound in the piece, if only for the first part.

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[.:Lost In Her Eyes:.]

Works Well

You've certainly got an interesting mix of sounds in this track, all mixed together around the piano, which works as a great foundation for the track. I can see that playing around with the other instruments has found you a sound that you're happy with.

This is a good tune for driving games, as the tune has a regular beat and it helps the concentration without being too obtrusive... well, not until you add that thumping bass at about 2.45, but since it's only for a few seconds, I think we can let it ride :P

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GronmonSE responds:

Driving games? ._.,

The thumping sound, well, I couldn't think of anything else I could add there.

Nevertheless, thanks for the review :D

[Project Part 3 - Omega]

Good collection

I like what you've done with the almost 'Zelda sounding' part here. It certainly sounds like you could write a whole piece around that genre.

I also like the way that you've moved forward with the tunes blending them together. The breaks in the middle sounded ugly and this is a much better finished piece.

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TheBellmaker responds:

Sorry for responding so late.

The breaks in the middle are ugly and I probabl won't do that again. Glad you liked this part.

thanks for the review!!

[Project Part 2 - Lambda]

Hmm...

It's certainly an interesting tune, with lots of variation to boot. If anything, I'd really suggest that you have a different way of blending in the different parts of the tune. I'm not sure about the silence or 'track break' that you currently give - blending them like a DJ would mix them would sound much better.

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TheBellmaker responds:

Sorry for the delayed response.

The track breaks do get a bit obnoxious after a while. This is probably the only time I'll ever use them.

Thanks for the review!

[Project Part 1 - Alpha]

Zombie dance hero escape?

Sorry, that is the first thing that came to mind as I listened to this! It start of kind of dark, then gets more of a dance thing going on, then livens up into something that reminded me of "hero" them music, then the final part reminded me of a movie escape sequence. Ah, the nonsensical fun you can paint with music!

Don't get me wrong, I like it, the variety keeps it interesting. Better still is how the different sections do work well on their own, yet they also fit together. This merging and blend of different sounds is great. I think the underlying pace is as least partly responsible for this, which you have kept constant - any change in that and the different sections would have become jarring. Even at the start when it seems slower, the potential is still there, plus that bit is so brief it doesn't distract from the faster sounding parts. So well done there!

Nice Track.

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TheBellmaker responds:

Sorry for the delayed response.

Zombie dance hero escape? impressive. thanks for the review.

btw I'mgoing to try different composition styles later on :)