Coop's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[p4c-Sometimes I Forget]

Very nice

I think that this started off a little slowly, but soon made up for it - the basic sound that you've got going to pace the track just sounds a little boring in the first minute or so - perhaps try just changing something a little in that, before it fizzes out and passes to the piano, becoming a firm backing piece.

I think that you've got a good sounding piece and this can only really be helped by a few things - making it a better loop for starters would certainly help, especially cutting down the intro for the second time around if that's possible at all.

Stopping the melody and the counter melody, allowing the bass solo was good, but you didn't capitalise on it - it deserved to do more, then it just fades out to the ending, which was a shame. Ram that home with some great bass samples and then bring back the melody and counter melody.

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p4c responds:

yeah i think that the ending really didn't do the song justice, and hte intro was extended a bit for if the song were longer and to be integrated into a dj set. i think it was varied enough that it isn't a bore, so i think i'll keep it ;) i also wasnt intending for this to loop--the audio portal has moved away from being the tools of flash users to its own autonomous music portal--so i intend it to be a song in itself and thats how i plan to keep it.

thanks for the review!

[Imperium]

Gentlemen, we march to war!

A nicely morbid tune, this has a deep sense of foreboding for the war that seems inevitable, as I get a deep sense of troops being mobilised and making their way to a field of strife, ready to fight for what they believe. Though with a name like Imperium, they could just be mobilising to crush some sort of rebellion under their mighty heels.

A good steady drum beat, very reminiscent of the US Civil War / War of Independence, with the drummer boys keeping the army's marching pace steady. I like the way that the futuristic beat comes in and takes over, symbolising the scale of Empires past, progressing to Empires future.

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EvilScorpio responds:

Thanks for so poetic review) I'm glad you like it)))

[SN |The Printing Process| SN]

Interesting use of vocals

Quite fast paced for a track with printing - printing either takes a very short amount of time on a lazer printer or an absolute age on an inkjet printer and never at this speed. I'll have to assume that there's a large document on a lazer printer here, to satisfy my nerdiness.

A great blend of a frantic beat and a massively paced melody to counterbalance it. Perhaps a little rushed and the beat could have been slowed down marginally, leaving the melody at this pace - possibly the difference between the paper speed and the print head rushing around painting the words and pictures on the paper?

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SessileNomad responds:

you give the craziest reviews xD

i can never tell if you complimenting or offering critisism

ill agree rushed, but not in a BPM sense, i did rish this to get it into the contest

[SN |Eidolon| SN]

Interesting

A really nice sounding piece of ambience that sounds great in its own right even before the glitches towards the end, which were a little jumbled but absolutely worthwhile keeping in the track.

I think that it's probably a little too 'happy' and upbeat to remind me of ghosts and spirits - that subject always seemed more morbid than you've portrayed it, but that's a question of perspective in the end. I think that the beat could certainly become more powerful in this piece, giving a better feeling of togetherness and completing the track nicely.

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SessileNomad responds:

the topic of spirits is def. a perspective sort of thing

as far as the beat being more powerful, power is sort of a personal thing as well, could mean many things to differnt ppl

the main thing that i was proud with the beat about was that it was a loop that i created by myself, which i had never done b4, i was exploring new grounds with this track

[SN |Rebirth| SN]

Nice

A very calming piece, that gives the impression of flying through treetops and surveying the canopy, before returning to a secluded castle, where the rain falls gently, refreshing the forests and giving nourishment to the plants and animals.

I think that there is a little static at the upper end of some of the notes, which is a shame, but not insurmountable, as some of this can be blended in with the rain sounds and can make it sound even better.

With the way that the swooping noises come in and out of the piece, it takes on a more encapsulating and enveloping impression of being in flight. This is something that can be built on, with more upbeat and impressive beats and a few variations in the melody.

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SessileNomad responds:

nice imagery, flying is a new one, but i def. see how one could vision that

there might be a little static with the piano, its EQ'ed pretty high in the high ends, thats somthing i do with almost all of my pianos, i feel it gives them more life

[Don't Lead Me Astray]

Too much static

A shame that I lost great swathes of the track, due to static at the upper ends of the notes. I can hear that this is a nice sounding tune, but a lot of remastering is required to get it into a 'publishable' form.

I think that there is a good selection of drums and strings in this decent melody that sounds nice and jolly, with some good opportunities to take it forward and give a little more variation to what could be a glorious fanfare for a victorious army as they return from defending the realm.

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DJ-Chilvan responds:

thank you for the advice. I agree with you all the way. But for me to remaster it the proper way I need to upgrade my DAW to premium. I'm still waiting but soon I will.

[Street Epic]

Not bad

Some of the beats in this have a little high end static - perhaps a slight volume reduction would assist with this piece sounding more rounded and balanced.

An interesting use of the 'wailing sound', as it seems quite eery, when the track gets to the end and this sound is all that is left.

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DJ-Chilvan responds:

thank you for the review. As i said earlied, im almost certain that that 'static' is actually the rain effects i put in the song.
Thanx!

[Terracrypha]

Good rhythm and pace

Another good track that shows off a nice little beat, but the tempo drags this track on more than most songs of this genre and the beat seems to be trying to catch up in parts of the song, but in a good way.

A nicely paced keyboard melody that keeps the track ticking over nicely, if a little blandly for my liking - perhaps more variation could be added there in order to get the tune to the bongos solo, which was a brilliant touch.

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DJ-Chilvan responds:

thanx man! I'm glad u liked it!

[Epmty {696}]

Far from empty

Another great sounding piece - a well composed beat and a lovely melody that runs along in the background. While I think that the melody could possibly use being a little louder in relation to the beat (possibly just make the beat slightly quieter, to aid the balance), it doesn't need a lot of change at all!

The track has a good level of variation and a cameo early on from the strings sets the tone for what is to come. A good modulation, changing the key up or down (I think down might suit better) towards the end would give the user something else to keep their ears overly satisfied.

A good track for Wipeout style racing games, if a little slow for that high end of the speed market, but still something I'd say worthy of considering.

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