Disappointing
I think that there was something in there that I wanted to see you do, but never got the chance to see it. With the type of flash cartoons you see on Newgrounds these days, you tend to expect the violence, the blood, gore and all the trimmings, to shock, possibly even to offend, but at worst, to showcase the artist's ability. Here, we see your drawing skills and a limited expose on your ability to animate:
Taking the birds as they are, with various themes of having both of them killed by one stone, you need to take it one stop further and actually animate the consequences of them getting hit by the stone. You could play dodgeball with them and have one die, before picking up the stone and trying again. There is a lot of scope for the plot of this and stopping at three occurrences just seems to be selling you a little short, in all honesty.
Good potential with the piece all told and I love the way that you've made the preloader - I'd perhaps consider a lorry delivering stones to the set and one bird writing up a long number of takes on a clapper board, though that's just my sense of occasion.
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