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[skiing]

Not enough detail

I can understand how proud of it you are - you've managed to get an animation combined with a tune that works together well. You managed to keep the filesize down, which is a great achievement, considering the quality of the music.

Basically, what I'm suggesting here is that you zoom in a bit and give more detail to your central character. When drawing the stick figures, zoom into them in your flash program and draw using a small tool, to give the most detailed look you can prepare - it's well worth it, as the control is so much greater.

The next thing you'll need to work on is a background, so similar techniques will be required there. Then comes the challenging part - a plot. The good writing makes a flash if you've got the time and effort to do it justice in the production. I look forward to seeing this.

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[SkullHead 'Green Fingers']

Genius.

As soon as I saw "Chapter 666: Venus Fly Trap", I knew that this episode had bad news written all over it. I love the way that Skullhead gets impatient with the whole growing process, so he gets the spider to take over.

I have to say, I did really worry when he pulled out the bra, the black sheet and the two tennis rackets, as to what exactly he was going to do.

Looking forward to the next episode, keep it up :)

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[TANKMEN 2]

Mmm, Mountain Dew

Jeff, you've done it again. This is amazing.

Will we see Tankmen 2.5, to show us how Skittles gets out of his little predicament? I love the new characters you've put in as well, they really livened the place up a bit, especially as we don't have to put up with the two Titanic freaks :P

The graphics on the tank really took a leap forward this time - I'm glad to see that it's broken away from the Newgrounds tank logo from certain angles, it really gives it a feel that it's more yours, than the sites.

Looking forward to the next episodes, keep it up!

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JohnnyUtah responds:

i do have an idea for 2.5 if i ever make it.