Great choice of sounds
The lip sync was great, the sounds were good (excelent quality) and the jokes were great.
I think that since you liked Wierd Al enough to put one of his tunes into this, you should really consider making a further flash, but this time a music video for one of his songs. In this format, you could knock us dead.
Made for the music
I like this piece, the whole animation has been crafted sepcifically for the music track which you used. It works well.
The animation can only be described as rough around the edges in places. For example, your sea looks like those that appear in pop-up books. The large wave that moved in the middle looked as if it was not connected to the rest. The other glairing error was that the planets orbiting the sun were orbitinin in 2D. In realityl the planets orbit the sun in different planes, where yours were all in the same, albeit differing width circle.
Anyway, I'm not here to pick holes in an overall good animation - I've just given you a few things to think about. This animation is a nice piece and I think you can use my comments to improve your work over time.
Excelently delivered
I love this movie. From the butter (?) jokes to the old skool Space Invaders characters.
The graphics are awesome as always, the sound is top-knotch and the humour is off the wall and hilarious.
Keep them coming
Nice use of silouette
I like the way the characters are given their own identity, even though they are still in silouette form. The music was a good choice, by the sound of things, you took the tune and then made a video around it, which worked great.
I think that you may need to study the art of slitting wrists though, as cutting across the wrist like that will never lead to death from blood-loss. Lots of blood will flow, but it's mainly if you want to cry for help or something similar. Cutting along the line of the bone will cause death, but I digress.
This is a great little movie, with only the song needed to make any aural impact, most of the animation is good quality, but I did notice you cheated with the re-use of certain scenes, like the door opening / closing and the drug butterflies. I'm not complaining, since that's what the pros do.
Liked it a lot
My favourites were 'Beach in a box $5.99' and 'OMG, I can't get in the box'
The graphics were neat, though some of the shorts were too short to be of any real great quality. You have some talented authors in this flash collab, I can see some careers going a long way here.
Planning on any more collabs? or are you all going to go solo now?
We're definitely going to be making more.
School is starting so we're probably not going to submit them every week or anything, but we have a whole list of ideas we're going to do for the next ones.
thanks for the review :D
Not sure what to make of this
It looks to me like a slideshow of two fan art pictures. If I were to make a slideshow, I'd have at least half a dozen pieces, no matter how good they are - the art is great in the second pic, while the first one looks like an original piece which has been altrered slightly, by adding the two characters flanking Bitey's silouette.
Don't get me down as a critic of this, but I think that you may need to make more of an effort to get this passed on NG, but you can certainly go back and work on getting more pieces into the submission, since the filesize is onlt 650k, you've got plenty of space to add things.
The navbar at the top of the screen is great, except it moves around between pictures, I'd reccomend leaving it in the same place, so you don't confuse people.
your right, Im not trying to make excuses but i didn't really have all the time in the world so i couldn't keep making more scenes but thankyou for the advice.
Needs a lot of work
Though the porno joke did make me laugh, I think that you need to do some serious work with your animation. Having bush switch between two faces all the time makes him look absoultely awful, so I'd reccomend that you just stick to one there. Cheney has never been the most animate political figure, but having him just slide along the floor is ridiculous. Why not give him some more movement, as the rest of the flash, except George's head seems very rigid.
The audio sounded a little muffled, as if someone was holding a handkerchief over the mic or something.
There is work required, but I'm sure you can do it.
Just watched the original...
I like this one, a very spirited effort at converting the world of warcraft video into more of an animated affair. The audio has been lovingly produced, but since that's not really yours, I won't dwell on it.
Your animation style is great, I like the way you had bowser behind a wall, so we can't quite see where his hand is - not that that's suggestive :P
I think you could have come up with some better characters to accompany Bowser and Mona, plus you had the guy in glasses speak two different voice parts - watch the original video if you want that confirmed.
I'm not trying to put you down, just show you places where you can improve - this is a great entry.
Another good offering
Why not submit all of these from the site? I am somewhat cautious about your presence, hy the fact that you haven't registered a profile to submit your works to, because they are top quality submissions.
I'd love to see more and I shall be visiting your website for them as well.
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