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[puzzelish]

Too short

It's not a brilliant loop, but it does have potential. What I'd suggest is that you work on making the spaces between the notes equal, as there is one in the middle that is off by maybe a quarter of a second, but it makes such a difference, especially if it's on a track that loops over seven seconds.

When you get that sorted, loop it over and over for about 2-3 minutes, then expand upon it. Use this as the base and build up things like a beat, a melody and other bits and pieces to make the tune sound better. Sure, if you'regoing for an 8-Bit sounding loop, you don't have much to work with, but there is a lot more than you've got at present :)

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mikkim responds:

I'd seriously like to see you expand on this song.

[It`s a Dream( Deejay DeeZ RMX)]

Reach for the sun!

A wonderful piece, great vocal sampling, a lovely beat and a nice melody that has all been blended together perfectly. The only thing about this tune is that it doesn't loop. Still, that's just being a little picky.

What you need to do to make it better is to maybe have a 30s solo on the keyboards, possibly with the beat dropping in and out of the context, just to highlight that piece. You've done a little bridge of it, which was great, but I just feel that needs to be taken further.

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DeejayDeeZ responds:

Thanks, im glad you liked it :)

And yeah a keyboardbreak is a good idea, im not going to change this song, but I will remember it to next time.^^

- Deejay DeeZ

[run rabbit junk (S.C.)*]

Not bad

The main issue that I have with this song is the amount of static over the vocals - I'd suggest that you either turn them down a little or you get your vocalist to stand further from the mic, as it doesn't sound as good as it could to me.

I think that the beat is nice, especially when you mix it up a little, away from the melody, then bring a slightly different melody back in. Sounds like you've gone for a Western sounding rock beat and then added something with an Eastern flavour over the top of it, which is a great contrast.

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BreakingFaces responds:

Thanks

[TBBAM Club Mix]

Good drive

This song certainly goes in for the driving beat and the melody, which blends in nicely with the beat, then grabs the tune and pulls it forward, giving the beat a chance to pace itself - reminds me of competitive team cycling, where one part of the team goes to the front and presses the pace, allowing the team mates to follow and catch a breath, before one takes over for the next push.

I think the use of the vocal samples was well done and not to excess, which is far too easdy to do in a format like this. Good to see the restraint used here.

I think that I might have used a few more different vocal samples, just to keep the variation going, but other than that the tune is technically sound.

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[<TheMayo>HiScore]

Well balanced

I could see this being the sort of tune that would be on the hi-score page of any game, just a little ambience for it. The only real problem with that being that this tune would seem a little involving for that sort of track.

Not to worry, you could certainly use it as a backing track for a platformer or a real time strategy game. With regards to the beat, it runs nicely through the track, but the higher pitched melody that you run over the top of it sometimes clashes with it. Nothing major, it's just something that you need to work on a little more in the mastering stage, as you tweak a note up or down in pitch a little, perhaps removing a few of them altogether, especially near the end, as it just seemed to fall off the rails a little, when it got really busy.

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TheMayo responds:

thnx for the advice
i might look into it

[Circle of Flight]

Well played

A very nice sounding piece, full of a background sense of trepidation and a wonderful sense of being and living for the moment in the foreground.

I love the synth that you put as the main counter melody - it worked really well. The melody was good, which gives the impression of walking in the air, rather than flying - flight would feel a little faster and probably a little more powerful for me.

I think that the start of it is symbolic of the adrenaline rush and perhaps a fear of the unknown, before it drains away towards exaltation and the flight itself. Marvellous.

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WritersBlock responds:

Thank you. Yeah, realistically, flight is fast, but flight gives me the impression of floating in air, quite slow, the horizon is much farther away, and it takes longer to get there. That and travelling through endless amounts of the same scenery, that's why I chose for a slower, more soothing piece.
Thanks for the review. :D

[Heartache]

Too chilled for me

I think that this tune is just a little bit too chilled for me - it's quite quiet and relaxing, but for me, it seems like it's more an ambient song than anything else. For Trance, I'd go for something with a little more beat.

I think that you've certainly produced a nice piece, but it needs a little something else for it to be one of my favourites. Perhaps try adding some strings next, as this piece seems to be hovering around ambient, so give it a little more nice guy imagery.

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[-rT- Paradox]

A little short

This track is good, but to make it better, I'd certainly consider adding another minute of music to this track. I'm glad it loops so well, but with a little more, you could make this so much more.

You've done well with the variation, because listening to this track a few3 times over and it doesn't seem to get repetitive, which is a good mark for any tune. Still, a little to work on, so keep it up :)

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[RES - I Don't Care]

Doesn't sound like you don't care :P

A nice tune, which is certainly very upbeat and a well presented piece. I would consider showing more variation, including a few more solos, without the beat to carry the tune along.

I think that it's a really nice tune, that I could see going as far as the mainstream, if only you added something like vocals to it, which would be awesome.

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Swerve responds:

The maintream.. That is a great compliment:D I don't really think it will, but thanks for the kind words!
Thank you for your review,

-RES

[==(Cloudclimber)==]

Climb to the sky

This tune tells me to reach as high as I can, and take what I can reach. I love the way that you've added the whale song to the tune, to give a little extra emotional impetus to the piece.

I think that you've spent a lot of time on this piece and the only way I can see to improve it would be to shorten the intro and make it slightly louder a little quicker, as it seems very quiet and takes a good few seconds to get into the tune.

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