More variation
I'm not sure how to take this series of tunes, as each one seems quite annoying in their own special way. On any loop of longer than 5 minutes, it could certainly get beyond annoying and this one, while better in many different ways from GO30, it doesn't seem like the uses are anywhere near as wide ranging compared to the predecessor.
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Strange... and I like it.
I really wasn't sure about this tune when I first listened to it, but then I was reminded of a Bill Bailey sketch, called "Jean Michelle Jarre (Is a Fraud)" If you've ever seen this, I would like to know if you've ever taken some inspiration from this, but regardless of that, this tune certainly instils a sense of urgency about anything that it could be applied to.
The only thing I could have seen done to it would be to make it longer and add some other vocal sample to it like a faint "you're running out of time" in the background. Subtle is the key here, otherwise the whole pretense of the song will be ruined.
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Good work
A song. Like you said.
Try to be a little more descriptive with the information that you give about your work, or people will start to think that it isn't yours ;)
Still, a nice piece, with a good beat and melody, mixed together well. I think that the variation is reall what makes this piece stand out from the rest of the tunes I've heard today, because with the variation, you've not only added another section to the song, but you've added a whole new dimension to it. A shame it wasn't longer really.
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Light and fast
I'm not sure about the start of the tune, but other than that, it's a fast paced, slightly higher pitched than needed, but otherwise a good sounding piece.
I think it's another piece that could use extrapolation and may run afoul of copyright rules, but if that's alright then you're onto a winner.
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T_o?
Nice sounding
A well written piece of music, that has really been thought about nicely. I loved the way that the lyrics appear to have been written first and the tune was composed around them afterwards.
The surprising thing about this track is that it loops well - tracks that are this long don't tend to, as there is no specific need for them to get past the stop point - this one would probably be mixed with other tracks of similar sound to make an even longer procession of tunes.
A nice sounding tune, I expect more quality like this in future.
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Too much static
There's a good sense of foreboding around this track and it would be nice to take this further, but the main problem that I have encountered with this is the large amounts of static that resonate around the bells and some of the higher pitched notes.
It's got a good chance to be great, but I would also suggest that the pauses are reduced, with something else in the early running of the track, just to keep the momentum going
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Not bad
Not particularly good either, but it's a basis to work on - with a little more work, you could turn this into a decent sounding piece - give us some more length, as the variation starts to kick in and then the loop starts again.
I think that with the way that you started (slow and steady), you've built a nice base to build on with a thumping bass beat and then some keyboards, just to take the song out of the intro and into the next phase of the song.
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Mortal Kombat!
Sounds very MK in the background - the only thing that was missing was the guy yelling "Mortal Kombat!" I think that it is a nice sounding piece - great buildup, so it has great probability as a menu piece.
With looking to make it better, I'd suggest looking to make it longer (maybe 2 minutes) and work on making this loop something that could be used in a fight - it's more of an intro to that, which is a good start, but only a start at the moment.
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Quite balanced
A nice sounding track that has quite a few nice blends of features, combined with a driving, but not possessive beat. It's a refreshing song that doesn't quite make me want to get up and dance about it, but I think that it can certainly go places.
It doesn't quite loop right, but over time I think that this can be worked on - try making it slightly longer, which would distract from that feature, especially if it's down to my laggy connection, or something, which is a possibility, I suppose. Personally, I think you're about a half to a third of a beat away from a perfect loop, but it might be something slightly different.
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Boss Fight
This tune puts me in the mind of a boss fight from various video games. Otherwise, it could be a menu song for something along the lines of Street Fighter or even Sonic style games, as it's trying to conjure up imagery of how the game is fast and frantic.
Perhaps with a little more variation on the beat part, it would be encouraged to take the next step - without that, the beat does get a little 'samey', unfortunately. Given a little modulation, it would work, as despite all the variation that you've thrown at the track to start with, there is still this little niggle of the beat being a simple loop that lasts for maybe 5 seconds.
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