Good Metal!
I like this tune, but I'm not sure about the transition from the thrash metal to the very mellow by contrast part at around 2 minutes. Perhaps this would be lessened by the application of lyrics, but I'm sure you already knew that.
The way that it picks back up again is good, but I just think that the change there is too great and it needs to be lessened. The way that the rest of the tune sounds is pretty damned good, with the fast drums, well devised guitar and a nice sounding melody. With how fast the drums go, you could ahve stood to go faster. Not that we're talking Malmsteen style speed there, just something that reflected the thrash nature of the drums that you've given us.
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