Very repetitive
Thump, thump, thump - throw in a synth or two, fade out, thump, thump, thump.
The robotic voice was good and a little creepy, though as this piece is a work in progress, I think that it's a good thing, as it shows that there is more stuff required, to take this to the next level. Variation, for example.
It's a good loop, but I think that there are things in there that can be expanded upon. The synths that you danced around with at one stage can be expanded quite a bit, to give you a lot more artistic freedom, while still remaining within the artistic constraints of the genre, I feel.
The bass beat is a little boring, but you've done some things to help combat that, by changing away from a simple repetitive beat and have thrown different combinations and tempos in there. Perhaps another instrument or two on the bass side could give you a different outlook on the track as it grows?
It's good, but it's not quite there yet.
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