This piece starts a little too quietly, but finished strongly, so while I find myself fiddling with the volume control throughout, to get the balance right, I found myself enjoying the piece of music wholeheartedly. It's more modern classical, than the traditional, with some of the electronica sounds and effects added as an afterthought. Did you play the piano yourself?
Lyrics would be nice - I'm trying to decide whether or not to have it as the backing for a poem, or whether someone should be singing.
This field of green,
It lies before me.
Stretching out and away,
Beyond my vision.
What lies behind,
It doesn't matter.
I cannot change that,
Any more than you.
All I know,
Is that one step.
Takes me somewhere better;
Put your best foot forward.
A little off the cuff poem for you. Probably not the best I've ever written, but it's got a little significance for me at the moment. Still, that said, this piece needs to have the early volume sorted, to give a better balance and perhaps a bit more impetus. I'd suggest adding some strings in the background, as that would work really well, complimenting the piano that you've created so far.
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