Too light
You've called this the song of storms, but it's too high pitched to seem like a story weather style tune. I think that you'd need to go an octave or two lower and maybe add some bass to represent something like Thunder and Lightning.
This seems more like wheat fields blowing in a summer's breeze, surrounding a mill, which is spinning slowly, grinding the wheat into flour, which gets taken away to the bakers. The smell of fresh bread and the relatively simple task that produce it.
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