Good tunage
I think this one could be a hit in clubs if you added some sultry vixen's vocals over the top, just for about 6 lines that you can throw into the song to give the saleability of this track a nudge in the right direction - people are more likely to buy a track if they sing the lyrics, plus it gets passed on easier.
Still, for Techno, you don't really need lyrics, but this could cross quite easily into the realms of mainstream trance as well.
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Yeah but I don't have a mic and i'll have to use one of those robotic things, and they suck P: Thanks for tah revyew!
Strut your stuff!
It sounds like a high class hooker walking along here, but then it becomes more of a club scene almost instantly, as she passes her bag to a minder and starts dancing provocatively on the floor, before walking around the club, sneering at the less wealthy clientelle.
That's how I saw it anyway. I'd have turned the volme down on it slightly, as it's a little rough around the edges.
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Ahaha! Nice image! I'm glad to hear that your seeing more than just a silver road like i got XD
I mainly used 3xOSC, so ya, it is a little rough around the edges. Why must all the good synths cost money that i don't have (yet...)? Oh well.
Thanks for the review ^^
Suspenseful
This sounds like one of those tracks that gets played as a backing track for when the bad guy is revealing certain key plot points to the characters prior to the main boss fight, then we get the big fanfare and all fire battle for survival that usually follows in these games.
I think that you could make it into a loop, which would be much better for the state of inclusion in a movie, as sometimes the boss does tend to get full of himself and go on for a little longer than this.
A very good use of the low chords and also with the blend of the keyboard in the background.
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Ooh, i like that image. However, i'm not a particularly loopy person, so i doubt if i'll be making one. But if someone wants a loop of this song, feel free to contact me, and it will be done.
Thanks for the review.
Take it further
It's a decent start, but I think that you could add things to it - other sounds from the keyboard would be nice, possibly an electric piano sound, to solidify the melody, rather than the beat and the rhythm that you've got here.
A stronger bass beat would also help, but be careful not to overdo it - that would be so easy to do with a track of this kind of softness.
Also, fix the looping issue, it would be much better then.
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~it's a preview, so that'll happen, THNX~
Not bad
This one has more good potential, but I think that the bass needs toning down slightly - it gets a slight static style feedback coming through my speakers and i haven't changed for the other stuff I've listened to, which is fine.
The length and variation are nice, allowing the listener to stay focussed, while at the same time staying within the constraints of the original concept.
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Yea I'm gonna upload a remastered version tonight, thanks
Good tune
Though it takes alittle while to get going, this is a nice piece of work. A little light on the pace and beat for techno, but I think you've got a good start in this genre in all honesty.
I think that your best bet for improvement is to knock up the tempo and possibly add a more powerful bass beat - let the tune mark its authority on the world of Techno.
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off beat bass would probably work...
Are you Jason?
So we've seen some improvement, compared to Jason I, there are some issues with the feedback in the first few seconds of the track that I'd really take some time to tidy up, as it will make the instruments sound a lot better.
As for the lyrics, they are so perverted and wrong, that they make Eminem look like a church going prude. You've got some issues and I think that you really need to take some time to come up with something that suits this type of music, rather than going on about wanting to suck a guy's titties.
Failing that, pass the metal tunes that you've created on to friends and get them to come up with some lyrics for you and that would certainly help - they aren't your strong point, so outside help may be neccessary.
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YOU ARE JASON! DONT YOU KNOW THAT BY NOW!?!?!?!?!?! FAGGOT!
Yeah...
I'm sure the music was good in the background, but I couldn't hear it too well, due to the random Tourette's Syndrome yelling in the foreground. If you're going to try 'singing' like that, step back from the mic and try to carry the tune.
If it was Rap, try to make the words sound a little poetic and keep time with the beat, as this bears no relevance to the music that is struggling away in the background.
I'd consider adding drums to the tune itself, as that would make it more imposing, especially with the power chords that you've used here.
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YOU NEED TO FIST FUCK YOUR MOMMYS ASS THEN YOU NEED TO THROW HER SHIT RIGHT DOWN YOUR FUCKING THROAT WHILE YOU ASS FUCK YOUR DADDY.
Not a bad solo
Not sure why, but this one sounds a little on the muted site, as if the pianist is quite some distance from the mic. Maybe a little remastering could help with this. I'd reccomend that you speak to someone like Jurian, who is a master at Piano and probably with converting them to audio files as well, since he puts his own work on NG in the same way.
I think that this tune sounds less joyous, compared to the first part. I think it is more reminiscent of the cassanova, who tried, but failed to woo his chosen lady this evening and now he laments, folornly.
There is always next time. Who knows.
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um omg you nailed it perfectly your the only one to get it right, :D you have a good ear and thanks for the advice, but accually xKore is accually working on it for me at the moment, i kept getting the same review that the muffled sound took away from it so i asked him to help since he did the first one, so i should be up in a day or so i'll let you know when that happens but thanks for the review
Cinderella goes to the ball!
A nice piece, certainly consistent with these big lavish partys thrown by aristocratic types. Possibly with something more sinister lurking in the background as well, but we can look into that at a later date.
I like the way that it plays out, the beat is nice and it sounds as if it would lend itself quite well to a string quartet accompanying the piano, just to add a little more life to the proceedings.
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again you are good at this, your not exact this time but your close, its about a guy who is all alone, but then he meets this girl where he instantly falls in love with at first sight, but there is a guy lurking who is also in love with this girl, so he kidnaps her, and he chases after them, but he is too late, becasue he has forced her to marry him against her own will, but he atlast saves her in the end, in a duel to the death where he wins
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