Not bad
The main issue that I have with this song is the amount of static over the vocals - I'd suggest that you either turn them down a little or you get your vocalist to stand further from the mic, as it doesn't sound as good as it could to me.
I think that the beat is nice, especially when you mix it up a little, away from the melody, then bring a slightly different melody back in. Sounds like you've gone for a Western sounding rock beat and then added something with an Eastern flavour over the top of it, which is a great contrast.
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