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[Apathy's Grace]

Apathy wouldn't be finished.

I think that it's poorly named song, but aside from that, we've got a decent piece with drums that sound too electronic for my liking and some well placed alternatives, but it seems like you're doing this for no real purpose, except for scatting to a beat that you're using from a pre-made selection, which is a shame.

With the way that the piece works out, perhaps it could loop, while working on making the rest of the instruments seem less abstract and bringing some essence of control to it all. Even Metal has more control than this piece does.

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Sawdust responds:

It isn't finished actually, but in a way it does, which makes it work in a way. But okay, I guess i can work on this, thanks!

[[S_Rock] Another Level]

A little slow, but good stuff

I think that you've outdone yourself with the variation on this track, but for me, the beat was just ever so slightly slow. Perhaps kick some more tempo into it and see what you feel like with that. As it's hip hop, you might want to get some vocal samples in there, to add more depth.

There's a good selection of instruments in here, but I would have liked to see a more dominant role for the piano - it's not quite influential enough, so could be given more of a role there.

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S-Rock responds:

Personally this one and Hemp Root are my favs cause the unique manor the song is played. Like the songs Tempo. I can picture Eminem Killing this song..So badly lol. Thanks for the review. When I make beats I picture the best rapper for the sound and just go to town

[CKC - Desert Child]

Very basic

Seriously, there's so little to this track, I can't really come to terms with where things need to change. Let's start with adding some voices and perhaps some variation in the middle, because it gets very boring after a few loops of this same piece.

Finally, when it comes to mastering, perhaps you could consider losing the first 10 seconds, as it's basically just silence, leading into the rain. Bring the rain in sooner, have it a little louder, so people can hear it and leave it for a few seconds, before launching into the loops.

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CKC2009 responds:

dont know shit.

[[S:C] Sum Wobble Rume-demo-]

A little quiet

I'm not going to write this track off completely, but as it stands, it needs a lot of work to make it realise the potential it has.

What I would suggest is that you work with making this piece louder and more imposing. I know that the quiet pieces are there for a reason, but perhaps adding something louder would make them seem more meaningful. Either that, or adding it together with the other parts and not submitting a demo would help us to hear it within the correct context.

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SymbolCymbal responds:

yeah man .. this piecve does need a shit fuck ton of more work in it. this really is a bare bones of what the track is now and what it will be when its finished. im definitely gonna up the balls power on this one.. that seems to be the chief complaint. as always thanks for the sweet review. i really appreciate the constructive criticism. Ill shoot you a PM when the full version is done and being sold on the haiti relief album .. and hopefully you will buy it!

[By the Gods!]

Apocalyptic Dance

Normally, I'd suggest that when your impending doom is on the horizon, now is not the time to get down and dance. However, you've done a very good job, producing a piece that is loaded with high quality transitions, brilliant variation and a good beat that carries the piece along through.

I think that it could have done with a few vocal samples here and there, perhaps of a woman sounding panicked with something like "they've come for us!" and the music comes back in through one of the transitions.

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sumguy720 responds:

Hmm, well that's interesting. I really would have liked to convey all the story with the instruments themselves, but I can see how vocals might fit in.
The short of it is that I don't have anyone to do vocals for me, and I much prefer working alone-- so meh.
Maybe I'll just try to write better music in the future.
Either way, thanks for the review.

[[dB] End of the World]

Hectic pace

I think that if it comes to that, I'll be playing "Dance of Death" by Iron Maiden, because there is no way that I can see myself running from the end of the world, like this.

I think that you've gone a little too long with the piano loop, so something needs to be changed, as it does seem a little repetitive, drawing us away from the actual plot of the piece - some high pitched stings should help as this would symbolise the fear that I think you're trying to conjure up.

Close, but not quite there.

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Decibel responds:

Thanks for Tha Review,
I don't think I agree with you on my part, but hey, everyone has their own opinion.
Personally, I don't like Iron Maiden that Much and I can't come close to that type of music. Yes, I agree the Piano loop is repetitve, but in my edited 2nd version Ive updated it to make it sound better with some new patterns. I used strings later on in the song, Pizzicato, but I think you're referring to those Pad-ish String, an ensemble, yes?
Thanls again for the review,
<Deejay>

[Flying_Fortress_Of_Chaos]

Shame about the looping

A good buildup to a very controlled sounding track, but this piece did kind of start to go away from the plot after you messed around with the vocal samples. A little too "Bill Bailey / Jean Michel Jarre" for my liking and I don't think it went with the rest of the track in all honesty.

You had some good variation in the rest of the track, so it really came to the fore, with the way that you showed your skills for this genre - possibly more work on the melody solo and perhaps the length side of things, but it's certainly sounding good for the most part.

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[Alive and Awake]

A little repetitive

If it's best from 2m to 2m 55, why not expand upon that and give us a track that is mostly "best bits" and less of the buildup?

I think that the beat was a nice piece, but it needed something else just to carry the track forward, as the melody was a little too simple for a track like this. Perhaps a solo is the way to go forward, then it would certainly start to sound more like the WipEout tracks that tend to come with these games. It's getting there, but it needs more of a tweak in my ears.

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TheSongSalad responds:

Thanks for the review man.

[<EagleGuard> Frozen Forests]

Soothing

Someone sits in the boughs of a tree and stares out over the forest canopy, watching the early morning mist dissipate. They are one with the forest and their mind wanders slightly away from their earthy body, allowing them a chance to feel the life within the forest itself.

I'm not a fan of the tambourine here, but the woodwind instrument that yu are leading with just seems magnificent, and I'd have gone for a more natural sounding "wooden" or "hide" drum, that would have given a much more fitting percussion accompaniment here. Just to keep with the nautural feeling of the piece.

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EagleGuard responds:

Nice introduction you've written down there :P

About the drums, I guess tastes differ. I think the tambourine sounds good enough, but I'll think about putting in other, more "natural" drum effects in other songs in the future.

Thanks for the review :)