A little quiet
I'd say that there were two real flaws with this piece - the volume and the length. It does sound really good when I turn the volume up on it, so we do have a very nice piece in the making that you can build upon, but I would seriously ask you to take some steps to improve the sound quality. Perhaps mess with the mic sensitivity, of get some ear plugs, so that you feel you have to hit them harder to get more sound out?
Anyway, as the piece itself goes, I'm not sure about the pauses, but the rest of the track is stellar. You've got a nice blend going with the way that all of the different drums come and go, but I'm sure you can do something with a deep, slow beat along in the background for effect.
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