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Nice endings

The one thing that really gets to me with the flash movies of this type is that there is no voice acting. It's such a simple addition and it's easily overlooked. You've put in so much dialogue here that it needs to be read out, rather than forcing the viewer to read it all for themselves.

I like how you've put the subtitles in one place, as it makes it easier to read - now all you need to do is tone down the font you chose for them, as it can be quite difficult to recognise certain letters in a short amount of time.

You've manipulated the sprites quite well and have written a decent plot for it. I would suggest that you have a scene selector, so that you can view the alternative endings, rather than just throwing us back in to watch the rest of the movie over and over again.

I liked the battle effects, with the swirling energy around both Sasuke and Naruto, it worked well with the rest of it and was definately your best piece of animation.

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Thank You...

Take it further

So we've got the examples of your 3-D rendering of a twin-linked minigun. It doesn't look bad, which is certainly a bonus. That's where it stops, as you need to put it onto a flash so that we can see how it would look, partuicularly when firing and objects or characters are getting filled with hot lead.

Good lateral movement in the bottom left, all gun barrels spin well, but overall, it could do with more depth - both of the context and of the colour scheme.

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Mmm, McDonalds.

Some of the things you animate are quite disturbing, Will. However, some of the voicemails that Newgrounds receive are more disturbing - clearly we can see this from the actual audio footage.

I wonder why the authorities let people like this into the community. I get the feeling that this might have been his one allowed phone call under police caution, as stranger things have happened before, haven't they.

I like the stick figure for Tom, as the way that the beard doesn't join up to the rest of his hair tends to indicate that he might be causing internal strife with himself by keeping the beard - it seems to have fallen out with the hair on his head. What's next? Tom shaves his head and keeps the beard? Sickening!

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Random Kleptomania

So we're getting better on the plotline front at least. The animation is good as always, but a veteran animator such as yourself should have quite a repetoire in the old flash tools, yes?

Now that we get a better insight into the life of Catface. As he is a cat, he does believe that the entire universe revolves around him and no-one else at all. Now that he has calimed more territory and property, he might just need a bigger place to put it in... either that or some friends to show it off to.

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Quite Random

A rather inauspicious start to the Cat Face series (Didn't you use the graphics from Cold Feet for the title of this series, by the way) with a very random plotline, where the shopkeeper has burst into flames, possibly because Cat Face doesn't like the man.

I would be very scared of the whole cat with a giant head floating down the street, rather than like the children waving to them. The innocence of youth, I suppose.

I'm glad that the future episodes have better plotlines, the fact that i can actually use the hindsight here only leaves me with one question - will you be submitting the other episodes over the next few days, or will you wait months to keep us in eager anticipation?

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Good, but short

I quite liked your idea of a stop-motion chalk-board animation. It works quite well. I have to say that your musical choice was great, with one problem - with a piece of music that good, you need to really come up with the animation goods to do the piece justice. You've come close, but there are one or two parts that let you down, I'm afraid.

It's too short to really capture the essence of Jurian's awesome piano, sadly. That track is almost 5 minutes long and your movie is about 2 minutes, maximum, with most of it being spent with the writing on the board, which I think deprives us of a well animated production.

The abstract nature is good and the whole image that has been counjured up is nice, but it does seem like you got bored and finished it too soon.

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Graeme responds:

He truely does do BEAUTIFUL piano.
I knew as soon as I started it wouldn't be the whole 5 minutes.
But when doing stop motion, it's hard to measure how long your animation is so far.
I think on my next attempt, I have a much better grasp on these things, and it will be better for sure.

And I didn't get bored, it was just a two day weekend, and I kinda ran out ideas
;)

You know, I stopped shaving to think of something to write here. That worked out well.

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