Sounds like a car chase
I quite like this one, throwing caution to the wind as you're driving your car through the city and suddenly you spot a car in the mirror, that is tailing you. You try not to react too quickly, because if you do, they might have to show that they're packing heat and off you right there and then.
Maybe make it into a longer track - 2-3 minutes should be better. Give us the essence of leading them to a somewhere like the freeway, so you can put your foot down and try to lose them. Incrrease the tempo and maybe the urgency of the piece, as it runs to the end.
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