You could rap over it...
Although I think that this would ruin the track unles it was a pro. Your friends probably aren't the next 50Cent or Eminem, so with that over the top, the song might sound ill, in a bad way.
This tune has good length :) and there is some great variation, that the artists can really focus on to make a flash around, for example.
Have you got any ideas for that? I'd love to see this turned into a music video.
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Nice tune
Some good sounds here again. I'd like to think that it was longer, but it seemed to work fine as 30s, rather than 2 minutes.
So you've used it in a flash already? Why hasn't it been submitted to Newgrounds? I'm sure other users would like to use this in their projects as well. The number of downloads would suggest that people are considering it, which is always a nice indictment.
The one issue I have with this song, length and looping aside, is that it sounds a little repetitive, , maybe 10 second samples of the track, repeated. Am I reading too much into this, or did you cheat just a little?
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Nice sounding, poor looping
I'd really address the looping issue here, as it is quite a short track... either that or ramp up the length of the track, as either of these methods tends to work for making people think that the track is longer, or it loops well.
A nice, futuristic sounding tune, with some good sounds from your chosen instrument (What is that, by the way?) I'd certainly like to see it being longer, so you can include more variation and different parts of the tune.
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I work on drawing this one out a bit.
Its a rezzy bass synth, with delay, of course...
Psychotic fruit machine?
Some nice sounds here, but the main thing is that they tend to mingle too much. I'd add some longer pauses between the sounds, so that potential artists can split them easier, to add them to their submissions.
A nice varied collection, nonetheless.
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A few blemishes, but...
Overall a good tune. I'd say that the synth sounds that came in at around a minute weren't quite timed well enough. That made the tune sound scrappy in that area, but other than that, the tune was nice. I did quite like the mono ringtone from the mobile phone which was in the second quarter of the tune.
The ending was clearly signalled and I think that maybe you should take that out and gun for a loop. It might just sound good like that - therefore it could be useful in games and movies, like some sort of club scene, for example.
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Nice and relaxing
I can quite easliy sit down and unwind after a tough day to this tune. I've had quite a day as it is, but now I've listened to this song, it's done wonders to unwind me so far :)
The tune is nicely backed up by some soft drum beats and the piano is certainly a dominant force, although it is not overpowering. This piece, as a jazz tune could wander about for so much longer, but sadly it doesn't.
You could quite easliy add another 2-3 minutes to this song, as it paints wild, but abstract images in my mind. I'm sure that as your fingers dance over the keys, you'll think of something to carry this on with.
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Great tune.
The length of this tune is more than made up for by the fact that it loops almost seamlessly. You cna have this run for 10 minutes and think 'Hasn't it finished yet?' before realising that you've listened to it about 12 times over. That's a very good thing.
A little variation in the tune is nice and I quite liked the way that it worked as one tune. I could easily see it being used in various games as ambient music, possibly even to creep people out. It's quite quiet, so that might convince people to turn their speakers up a little ;)
I'd only consider adding more length to it, in order to add some more variation to the track and keep the audience interested.
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Impression of you...
The impression I get of you is that you don't seem rteally committed to proper long projects at the moment. You bail out of what would be a perfectly good song when you've barely finished the intro.
This one sounds like if you carried it on for another 2 minutes or so, that it could be a really nice tune. It was just warming up, by the time you came to the end of it, which I feel is a real shame.
It's a ncie instrument, the organ. If you could continue with it, I'd love to hear what else you can present to us on it.
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Well remember theres a better version, this one got fucked up.
Not bad
This is short, but acceptable. It sounds like a decent backing track, but I could suggest the best use for this is with voices, for when there are radio-based communications. It literally sounds like you've recorded a static track off the radio.
Still, I'll not suggest that you could be so shallow and I'll instead say that you've come up with a decent loop. I'd say it needs to be longer, because in this guise, you might need to increase the variation, sot hat the viewer doesn't spot what it is that you've done.
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