A little slow, but good stuff
I think that you've outdone yourself with the variation on this track, but for me, the beat was just ever so slightly slow. Perhaps kick some more tempo into it and see what you feel like with that. As it's hip hop, you might want to get some vocal samples in there, to add more depth.
There's a good selection of instruments in here, but I would have liked to see a more dominant role for the piano - it's not quite influential enough, so could be given more of a role there.
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