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[Won't You Be My Neighbor]

Strange... kinky... compelling

I'm not sure what's going on here, but I'm going to try and get to the bottom of it all. Right, there is a woman in only a fur belt, metal mask and chains criss crossing her flesh. I only say female, due to the figure / breasts. The face does look quite infantile and doesn't give any real clues as to a gender from my point of view.

The eyes do need some work, as they are not level - move the right one up a little and slightly to the right, just to get it mostly even and perhaps redo the mouth - it currently reminds me of Patrick Moore, which is more than a little disturbing.

The background is good for setting the mood and with that in place, just a little more attention to detail is required to bring it all together.

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[Ghost]

Hmm...

Well, this piece looks better than the others of your work that I commented on yesterday. The situation here is bereft of a background, which is significant in symbolism and not necessarily a crass omission.

I think that some of the lines on the piece look smoother and as a result, there is a better looking finish to the piece and the way that there are some hard lines for the gun. It's a shame that they weren't continued for parts of the equipment for the character here.

I like the skull - I personally think it looks quite creepy and as a result, you've gone on to portray a simple little piece of symbolism, regarding the armed forces and their deployment across the world. Perhaps without the identity patch, it could be a nameless soldier, searching for a name and a face to accompany it?

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[SHW-29 Graveyard]

Tidy this up and we're rolling

I think that you've got a talent for drawing, but it needs more attention to detail, just to take it away from that rough "sketchy" looking finish that you've currently got working. Spend some time zooming in and sweeping over the lines, just to make them more solid and less like you've drawn them five or six times. This way, when you zoom back out, the image will seem to come more into focus, thus presenting a much better piece.

The background is particularly psychedelic and the soft focus works well here, as colours in the sky have a tendency to blend into one another quite nicely. With that sorted, you'd be able to leave some sort of deep message within the piece.

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[Rorschach]

Too brightly coloured

A good concept and idea, but the main thing about the character concept of Rorschach and the whole setting for Watchmen is that it's a very dark and grimy place to live. To this end, I would seriously consider toning down the reds of the bricks, not only because of the scene continuity, but for the fact that the blood on Comedian's badge tends to blend in too well with the bricks.

Don't forget, there wouldn't have been so much of a blood splatter, as there was just a single drop across the eye, there.

I like that you've added the graffiti to the wall, as that adds something to the scene that there isn't necessarily going to be there. Perhaps to change the lighting, you could knock the lamp out, since dilapidated scenery will certainly fit with the ideals set out by Moore and Gibbons

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[Japanese Wolf]

Needs more practice, but good

For a piece that is drawn freehand, you've not done a bad job overall, but there are a couple of things that need to have a little more attention paid to, just to smooth out the detail:

1) On the hind leg - should that be an encased line, or should it just be a line of fur that is only attached on one side? That looks like a small inconsistency there, that just needs a little more attention to.

2) The circle looks imperfect - I know that it's really difficult to draw circles freehand at the best of times, but practice makes perfect and a soft pencil (4B; 6B) for sketching would be perfect here, as you can correct mistakes easily. Granted, towards the end, when you ink it over, it should look a lot better, but it's getting it there that remains the goal.

Keep up the work and when you get a better scanner / camera, we'll see some more results.

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MonoFlauta responds:

okok, thanks a lot :P
yeah the leg and the circle are bad u.u

well
thanks for reviewing :)

[Japanese Dragon]

Not bad

I think that you need to get a scanner if this is done on a standard A4 piece of paper, since the lighting differences caused by the flash of the photography does take away from the piece a little.

Still, that aside and you still have a good looking piece overall - did you copy it from an external source, or draw it with no assistance, except for memory?

I think that the piece could possibly use more detail in the way of creating more effects of the scales, like the way that the traditional drawings of this type tend to look. Still, a great start.

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[Futurama]

Bender with a Shiny Metal Ass!

Wow, you even did justice to that. I love the way that this looks like I would view it as a "live action" version of the incredibly funny and well written series.

You know, I'd really like to see you draw some other members of the crew, particularly The Professor, Amy and Hermes, but then again, tense negotiations between Zapp and Nixon would be another interesting focus for your talents.

While the drawing style itself does give a rather impressive "scruffy" look to everything, it does point out to me that Leela's breasts are a little on the small side - kind of how I'd see Amy's being, while Leela seems to have a fuller figure, particularly with the way that Amy keeps bitching about it.

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[Cleen the Clown]

Why so menacing?

What is the story with Clowns that look like they are ready to rip someone's face off as soon as look at them? This one seems like he's thinking "If that custard pie comes anywhere near my face or trousers, I'm gonna cut you."

Perhaps the face paint could be changed slightly - the moon shape doesn't look very symmetrical and with the way that the rest of the face does, it feels like it should be.

Give the guy some ears and a little hair, like sideburns or something similar. As regards the hat, you need to make it look more 3D, as opposed to a triangle that sits atop his head.

Finally, the postcard size of the piece makes it a little difficult to get around, so I'd suggest that you make it slightly bigger for us all to enjoy.

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MCarsten responds:

LOL, i laughed a lot with your possible phrase from Cleen about the pie! hehehehe. The story is from a clown that give children in the circus, pops with cyanide and then rob them out, was a story originally made by me and a friend, we're was creating a scary-horror tale.

I believe that if the conde in his head be more 3D, can add a more good looking into it. The ears from him was to be that more "fat" line in his side, and i agree with you, doesn't seem like a ear. Yeah, the image can be bigger, by this way can show much more things from the mysterious Cleen.

Thanks for the nice review! Thanks!!!

SpyS.