Coop's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Narrator's Love Story]

Funny stuff

I like the way that you've got three teenage girls chasing after one ordinary looking guy. It's so ironic, it's almost believable :P

I think that your animation style is nicely planned out and the delivery of the punchlines was good, if a little repetitive, with the dense, uneducated manner of the main character.

When the three randy girls walk off at the end, I'd certainly consider making their legs move, rather than moving them like chess pieces, or dolls. This was really the only major issue with the flash itself, so good work overall.

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PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, the ending part really I just was too lazy and made them jump like that although I should have made it a bit more realistic rather then like you put it 'They were sorta like chess pieces." So I'll work on a more visually and well animated ending for my next animation.

[Pirate Songs: For the Win]

Car Salesman sells CD?!

What a great little idea. The traditional car-salesman type, but robot formed, attempts to sell a CD of pirate songs.

I loved the sound effects on the voice, with the little echo and the way that the Southern (Georgia) accent seemed to fit in so well with the personality of the robot.

I'd have reccomended a splash for when the CD is flung into the water, plus maybe a little more attention to detail with the splash of water - it looked too lazy for it to be real, hanging in the air for maybe half a second too long.

I'd have said a better location for the commercial would ahve been a pirate ship, but I can see the symbolism of the 'treasure island' and that worked well enough.

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DarkenedDecay responds:

Thanks, I was going for a Texas accent but close enough! XD

The splash was kinda lazy, next time I'll be sure to work on things like that a little more.

A pirate ship! Why didn't I think of that!? That would have been awesome! "Dang man, I can't do nuttin right."

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 185]

They've invaded the UK!

Oh my god *dives into bunker and loads the shotgun*

So this pokemon looks like a Stick insect that's done anabolic steroids for a few months, while undergoing certain weight regimens to beef him up somewhat. Adolf's disguise was only betrayed by the poke ball he had in his hand.

At some point, I'd love to see you using a different picture of Hitler, even if it was for one episode, as it can't be that much more effort, surely!

Does this one need trainign at all? Possibly by stringing a piece of elastic between it's antennae, in order to make a crude slingshot?

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Maybe Adolf will make it to Worcester some day.

[Alert! Monsters At 5:23!]

Organised Chaos

This was quite a random beginning, but it did have a nice little plot to it. I quite liked the flames that sprang up around the monster once that axe was embedded in his back.

I did at first think that I was in for a whole host of randomness when I first saw it, but the whole flash, while not exactly the best drawing and animation style, did seem to convey the patchy plot reasonably well.

If you spent more time drawing the monsters, you'd be in line for higher marks, which I think you're capable of. Of course, the flash itself would need to be longer, with a longer plot to cope with this new expectation.

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Ying-yong responds:

Thank you for the review.

The plot was sort of made on the fly as it was just going to be some random chaos with no plot to explain it. Glad you liked it.

[Cow in Submarine]

Quite liked it

Not a bad little flash, but I would draw your attention to a couple of points:

1) The music was a little quiet - I know that it gets quieter in part of it, where we were outside the Submarine / U-1337, but even when it was playing normally, it sounded a little quieter than I'm used to eharing audio at.

2) Why not consider drawing the Yellow Submarine in an effigy of the animated classic from the Beatles' film of the same name.

I liked the idea of the Nazi cows shooting the sub out of the water, but please remember that there would not be a flame from the reat of the torpedo, as it fires under water - a strem of bubbles tends to be there in its place.

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Imacow responds:

Yeah, I screwed up a little with the noise levels. I dunno why I didn't draw it like it is in the film, but I kinda like mine better anyways.

It was a magic torpedo.

[Tangerine Madness!]

You know when you've been tangoed!

A decent little animation, with a simple layout for the animation in the ease of your drawing style.

I liked the black and white set-up and adding the colour to it only served to make it better. I would advise that you try to give us more plotline, as these gags are good for maybe one or two re-runs, but after a while they get quite samey. Coming up with something with a more detailed plotline means you could set up a series and keep yourself in a progression of that for a while.

I'm not sure how this drawing style would translate into other similar flash, but there is only one way to find out and that is to produce more and let me see them.

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MinusNick responds:

Thanks for the awesome review! I have a few ideas for this guy, and hopefully they turn out good, too!

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 184]

So where is this circus today?

It's a bit vague as to the location - I'm sure that people like Graham-Loves-Goatse are looking for Hitler to get his autograph, aren't they?

Anyway, this new evolved pokemon looks like a painted easter egg, with bunny ears and a tail that has been rammed into a 230V socket, before being connected to the National Grid. I'm trying not to say anything about Hitler and his fruity get up today.

I wish you'd go and do some proper animation and let these noobs follow you into doing something more worthwhile, like writing a better plot, for instance... You'd be like the pied piper of NG!

Is that too much to ask for?

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

These travelling circuses wind up all over the place.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 183]

Review #816

I was hoping for something more for a flash that ended in '83' to be honest. Still, I suppose that there is still 283 and 383 to hope for, isn't there?

I'm quite glad that a pokemon like this does not inhabit the UK, otherwise I'd have to go on a hunt just to get rid of the little fuckers myself. How stupid is the shape of this one anyway?

Aside from that, Hitler looks as if he's gone to the plumbing surplus store to grab himself a few bits and pieces for his disguise today - it looks like he's taken various curved pipes to make his tail and the tip looks like a ballcock (No jokes please, I've heard them all :P)

Does he get discounted rates on his makeup?

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

T'was a spring from a sofa with a buoy attached.

[Proportioned Clocks]

Needs more plotline

Not a bad little idea - making the clocks proportianal to the world that we live in. The next logical stop is to have the clocks leave clocktopia and invade Earth. We all know that Strawberry's ambitions are much much more than just to be King of the Portal.

Now that you've solved the mysteries of the proportionator (Got to give it a catchy name), they are but one step away from dominating the world.

Aside from the randomness about my theory for a new flash series, this is a pretty good flash - a nice punchline and the proportions are good for what little you've given us to go by. Maybe Raspberry was a little on the large side, or Strawberry was just small, but I don't tend to see Raspberries that are as big as Strawberries, where I come from...

Still, it's a nead flash, but you could have at least shown Biological Clock landing on them, rather than blacking out the screen.

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[Phoenix Wrong - Airplane]

Nicely done

I like the way that you've made this piece themed around a particular movie. Airplane! is iconic and easily recognisable and you've taken some good quoites from the movie.

Of course, this opens up a whole cavalcade of movies you can use this for - Naked Gun and Police Academy immediately spring to mind. How about it?

Good manipulation of the sprites and good co-ordination of their movements with the sound track. Considering this is your third submission to Newgrounds, you've got it down to a good art.

I want to see some more, so make some sequels!

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AbsolutePredator responds:

Ill try and find quotes from those to make it happen