Excellent submission
I loved the attention to detail and the way the bad guys actually got to land some hits on the good guy. You must have worked long and hard on this, so well done. I will point out two failures on your part though:
1) The size of the window just looks too small. However, this is easy enough to fix.
2) No plot. Should you wish to make it good with stick-fighters, I suggest that you develop a plot for the next one. (I can help with that if you need, just email)