Coop's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[DeathArena]

Needs working on

Sorry my friend, but I can't vote this up more, no matter what I think of you.

You've managed to prove you can deal with certain aspects of flash - movement and sound (music) in particular, although the whole thing together looks poor.

What you need is a voice soundtrack for starters and more than just coloured blobs representing the main characters. To make your background drawing more detailed, try zooming out and applying a small brush. It takes a lot longer, I know, but the results are worth it.

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HomerDough responds:

meh

[Korean Love Story]

A good story

This is a realy valentines day heart warmer.

The animation is decent, although when the long shots are taken, the legs look great with the Xiao-Xiao / stick animation style, although the arms look way too wooden.

A well devised plot, which has become a classic love story. Do you plan more? If so, I'd be interested to see them.

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Kenzu responds:

I will continue my flash work, but I won't submit many love stories. I'm focused at a different topic.

PS: But love gets involved sometimes.

[Legend of Zelda : HTW]

A good solind start

I like the concept of this flash, combining the classic 80s computer game and the internet like that. You've shown good use of the sprites and of the audio as well, which you should be proud of.

The thing is, it's too short (eager to submit, by any chance?) I'm looking forward to seeing the next one, but I'd like to see one that lasts a few minutes even when you take out the need to click past the text.

I like the shameless plugging of newgrounds on the internet and think that this can become quite a series, if only you nurture it carefully. Don't make snappy decisions about the direction of this and it should turn out fine

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[Sherbert the Cat 3-2]

Getting better

I've had a thought about why Sherbert's movement looks so wooden. Maybe you should try giving him knees, since his legs move with the stiffness of a few pieces of 2x4. That's my inspirational thought for today's review. (Remember that cat's knees bend backwards on the hind legs)

Still, you're getting better with your animation and although the plot isn't really to my taste, I'd say you're certainly getting to grips with the animation tecniques. The audio sounds crisp and clear too, so a good job there.

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[Minefield]

Unstable foundations...

...should not be used when building, as this leads to subsidence. Metaphorically speaking, this is what I feel about this flash.

The sound is decent, but you need to actually act the voices out yourself, or get a friend to, I'm not that bothered.

Your graphics need work - I'm not the biggest fan of sticks, but these are poorly animated ones. Was that a gun in the first scene? It barely looked like one. Still, working on these can only improve you.

However, this has the beginnings of a decent plotline, which must be nurtured, so that it can blossom to its full potential.

I'm getting quite philosophical about this flash...

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Frenzy responds:

Thanks!