You know, I stopped shaving to think of something to write here. That worked out well.
Age 41, Male
Author / NG Mod
Old Skool
Vancouver, CANADA
Joined on 4/28/04
Great story! And congrats, I guess.
And about Wade's voice in your helm. Does that mean that you have a microchip in your head?
Also, I'm sorry, I hate myself for this but I have to point this out:
2nd paragraph "he heaRd a cry"
Some other paragraph "PriNce Wade".
Now I can rest in peace.
Wades voice in my helm is from a magical enchantment on the helm. It's effectively a helm that allows limited telepathy.
As for the typos, they've now been fixed ;)
Congratulations on your win!
And to you as well. I'll be sure to scan over your winning submission, since it was officially better than mine :P
Congratulations, and that was an awesome read.
Thanks, it's a hobby.
I'm just glad I'm finding my writing rewarding now - it's certainly more fun than it was and now the enjoyment seems to find its way onto the page :)
And the epicness continues. :D
Yeah, it's official now, having actually been acknowledged by the servers that I'm a TOP 30 B/Per!
I will blam you 22,000 times you cock sucker, fuck you bitch.
Well, you said that I'd never pass you for B/P. Though you may pass me again, unlikely as it may seem, I feel highly capable of passing you on a more permanent basis after Cock Day
There's something about your writing that really grasp one's attention and I dig the illustration of the imps as the fiendish reviewers. Thus, my impression of you has grown twofolds. Well done on your accomplishments and all the best Sir Coop.
Thank you Sir! I am very happy to be a part of it. I'm sure that with practice, my writing will become even better :)
Odd, I thought the moderator 'initiation ceremony' involved many more naked men than portrayed in your story, and large weapons of a different variety.
Perhaps you were drugged; explains why you have a massive gap in your memory.
Wonderful story Coop; your technique is definitely improving.
I've yet to read your June contest entry, so I can't comment on that. But congrats on your accolade!
1) I've got to go to the Mod Meat for that one :P
2) Thanks very much, I'll look forwad to hearing what you think about my other piece.
Sir-Nuts
Coop, your stories are great. You have talent for that.
And I was wondering the other day: while you write great stories, your girlfriend has excellent artistic skills. Have you ever worked together on a project?
Coop
Not yet, but I think she's starting to learn Flash. When she does, I can come up with some scripts and some voice acting for her ;)