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[Textual Adventures III]

Tell me a story

Seriously, it's quicker to just send me the text file, rather than have this sort of animation let loose. Maybe you need to make the text of Ryan and Brian into shapes of actual people - it would just seem more believable to the human condition that way.

Also, Han Solo and the Milenium Falcon sucked balls. I never saw a Blue Falcon before and neither was it that shape. Rip a photo, we're not judgemental at all here :P

I think that with a few sounds thrown in, like the explosion and maybe a splat for hitting Ryan would be cool. Perhaps voices as well, but maybe that's going too far?

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Frenzy responds:

I tried to find sounds, but my hard drive recently failed. So I got a new one and all the sounds were gone!

Thanks for the review!

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 135]

Eevee evolves again?

Didn't one of the Eevee evolve into a Vaporeon yesterday? I thought that the general evolution progression was for one Pokemon to evolve into something and then for it maybe to evolve into something else.

Perhaps this is a rare Pokemon that can evolve into two seperate things?

Iron Maiden rocks!

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

Eevee will probably have about 100 different evolutions at some point.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 134]

Reminds me of a Haggis

The creature in question perched on the side of the mountain reminds me of the legendary creature, the Haggis. As you are probably aware, the Haggis has two legs shorter than the other two, thus enabling it to walk around the sides of mountains, while maintaining an even stance.

Still, what I feel I need to ask is how does Hitler go about training his Eevee? Does he get them to do precise drill, so that it can goose-step perfectly? Or does he just get it into hating us English types?

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

He does it in the usual fashion.

[Luigi the janitor]

Lacks plot

Well, this flash really needs some work done on it. I'd start with a black subtitle bar running underneath the flash itself, so that we can see what each character says in the same place.

Next, your graphic violence needs a look at - when you blow a hole through somebody's face with a gun at point blank range, you tend to ahve something explode its way out of the back, with the bullet. The entrance hole is never a perfect circle, either.

Then there's the gun - you've grossly oversided it, so it just doesn't work. Over these few issues, there is some room for improvement and if we could see that, we would be onto a winner.

If you get a plot written and animated, with more sound effects and maybe even a voiceover, this could be in line to win awards at some point.

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mothballs responds:

Thanks, I love constructive reviews. If I ever make another one I'll keep that in mind :)

[Knuxrouge's Newgrounds]

Needs sound

And animation, for that matter. You've given us a repeating loop of the generic four movements for the characters. Sonic just disapearing from the scene offered us so much more - why didn't he just run off?

What you need to do is invest in a microphone - It would have been much better with the addition of sound, to go with more animations for the characters.

Also, the remark of Shadow "Broke N***a" micht be seen as causing offense, so you may wish to stay away from that all together.

I'll look forward to your next cartoon and offer a fair criticism, should one be required of that also.

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knuxrouge responds:

Animation wasn't the centerpoint of the flash and the sudden vanishing of Sonic was deliberate.

I'm broke, so saving up for a mic will be pretty damn hard.

It was meant to be funny, no one so far has found it offensive and why should they if its directed at me?
Besides, for the record, I'm black.

Thanks for your review.

[Shared joy is double joy]

Interesting short

Well animated, slightly disturbing and lacking in any definative plot, without character juxtaposition etc.

I loved the way that the name of the flash and your own details were advertised. They were to the point, where so many people have to come up with some sort of graphic for their fictitious company. You've gone straight to business here.

While the character who conducts his self-mastectomy wanders off, the second one, who ends up with a tit on his head could well have become a police officer, as the police in the UK get helmets which were the same shape as the final silhouette. Maybe an interesting subliminal message there..?

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[One Cowgasmic Christmas]

Attention to detail required

Well, it is a short and sweet Xmas production. I think that the animation is fine in itself, but for my tastes, there are a few parts, which need greater attention to detail:

Fine detail. Where you did a close up of the cow's leg, I noticd that there is a black line that runs over onto the background. Then as he comes down the stairs, I noticed a lot more of these. Granted, they were further away, but it shouldn't take you too long to tidy these up, because that would make the overall finish look so much better.

The other thing was the sound quality of the Link music, which you used for the opening of the box. A little static crept in here and it would certainly help to get rid of that.

Still, your drawing is great, aside from the detail issue and with a little more effort, we'll see some good stuff from you :)

Happy Xmas.

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Imacow responds:

Thanks, I dunno I kind of like that little overline, it can make it look stylish sometimes.

Also, I tried realy hard to get the static out, but I wound up keeping it like it is now. Originally the sound was really messed up.

Thanks for the review, Merry Christmas.

[Adolf Hitler:CAI493+D 132]

Barbie?!

My god, I know the Pokemon was pink, but did you have to play some music from a girl's story disc?

Hope that you've had a good Xmas and that there is much success for you in the Flash market this year.

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AfroUnderscoreStud responds:

The year is almost over.

[Sherlock Holmes Christmas]

Cheekily festive

What a lovely little festive flash this is, complete with a Victorian England backdrop and as much sexual innuendo as you can shake a stick at!

Some of the drawing style needs a little work, as it is a little rough around the edges, but if you zoomed in a little, you would be able to sort this out with no trouble.

This said, with the application of effort and time spent on next year's script, you'll be plucked from relative obscurity and placed amongst the award winners for 2008's Xmas collection.

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[A Bahamut's Xmas Tale 2-2]

Review #714

My triumphant debut! Huzzah!

Aside from bitching about the very poor impression of how I looked - too wide in the middle and I look like I've got a hernia :P I was impressed. It's also typical that I've changed my beard style back to a proper goatee as well.

I think that overall, the project is becoming well rounded, with bits and pieces for the easter eggs and other such parts, but I have to know if you went through with the idea of the commentary - I saw the Wyvern / Fagamut thing and the info about all of the contributors. Somewhere there was a commentary mentioned, but I can't find it >:(

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kinggila responds:

lol, I tried to make you look muscley there. XP But you were impressed, so that's fine. :) And about the commentary idea, I'm sorry, but the idea fell down the drain. No-one bothered to make a commentary besides you. :( Oh well, I'm glad you enjoyed the flash(es) and thanks for the reviews, Coop. :)