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Interesting duet

Ah, the clash of two parts of the piano played alongside one another. Could this possibly be played on the same piano at the same time? Or is it a more modern duet that is played by two people on two pianos?

I like the way that the clash compliments the piece. Perhaps a change of instrument would be a more "disturbing" change - have you considered changing the lighter parts for a harpsichord? That could add a little flair to the piece and give you some other area of contrast.

Yes, I understand the concept is to tell the story short, but perhaps a minute longer for the track wouldn't make that much of a difference to the overall impression that the piece gives.

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ErlendHL responds:

Yeah maybe another instrument would be nice. I am not sure it can be played with two hands on a piano... gotta try to learn my song on piano! And yes perhaps it should be longer. Anyway it's not short because it should be a short story. It's pretty much because I felt I had used all "prospects" of the melody.. idk how to put it. Anyway, thanks for your review!

Good buildup

A very pleasing song on the ears, the intro works well and doesn't disappoint as we come into the main body of the piece, adding a few more drums in and not leaving the impression of being too crowded.

You've learned to add, but also to take away, which certainly helps your pieces. I'm not sure about the counter melody in the middle of this piece, as it's a little too much of a tangent for me to take, but when the piece comes back afterwards, there is no sense f loss, more that you've returned to where the track needs to be.

Given a little more tweaking, you could make a lot out of this piece.

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habon responds:

Thanks for the review!

Not bad

It gets a little repetitive, but I can see that it's a tune that could work. Perhaps it needs to be given a shove into more variety and allowed to develop in a more creative manner.

Yes, I understand that some tunes are liked to be repetitive, but why have a 3 minute track, that doesn't change very much, when a 30 second track takes up 6 times less space and can be used in the same way?

Your grandmother was a bit of a clubber in her younger days, was she? It takes all sorts, I suppose. I'd have said that it could be considered garage or more likely Drum n Bass, which would accommodate the drumming properly. If you slowed it down a little and added more deep, menacing thumps on the drums, you could call it industrial, but it's down to you at the end of the day.

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Xenophaje responds:

I don't know why I made it that long, at the time I wanted to see if I could keep repetitiveness, I'd forgotten I didn't have the skill to do so. (Guess I was just fantasizing). Since then I have improved (in only 2 months).

About my grandmother - it was just a thought really.
Honestly, I have no clue my grandmother's youth was like. It never occurred to me to ask her. I doubt she was given how much of a sweet old lady she was when she was alive (in my time). She died 3 years ago so... yeah...

Thanks for the Review.

Needs more balance

Okay, so the guitar and drums are pretty good. I'd say that you need to encourage a little more volume out of your bass, to drag some balance to the song.

As with certain other of your pieces, I'm not the world's greatest fan of your voice. Sure, you can sing, but there is an issue with how your vocals wander around - sometimes, there is an awesome sound and others, it does go quite flat, which needs working on, otherwise the good work with the guitar just falls flat, which isn't nice.

Finally, working on how the lyrics should sound when sung would help - try to get the beat of the syllables to match to the tune, as that might help the piece sound better.

Mind you, the ending sucked, with the scream and the laugh into the mic.

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Sawdust responds:

Thanks for the advice! I'll definitely follow all of that in hopes that my songs will illicit a reaction of "whoa!!! awesome!!!" instead of "it's nice".

Thanks again

Too short

It's fast, catchy and absorbing. However, there is one major catch and that is that the sound gets very old, very quickly. It doesn't quite loop right, with a half stutter step in between the end and start again, but that seems that it might clear up a little after a few passes... might just be me then.

Sadly, after those few passes, I had to stop it. Lengthening this piece out to 2-3 minutes would be a good idea, but then more work is required - variations in the main melody, plus adding a counter melody would help. Consider a bass solo, or something else with the drums, to keep people interested in the track, otherwise, even at a rave, you'll have problems with keeping the floor filled.

I'm not saying that you need to butcher this track, to keep it effective, but it's a little too basic in the current form, that's all.

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zzbtbest1000zz responds:

pfft, too short? That's the point, so I don't see where you're getting at with that

Besides that, thanks for the 6, man ^_^

By what you are saying, I suggest you should listen to my other works, they are fully developed. While this was made in 40 minutes, my others were made in larger time frames

A little repetitive, but it could go somewhere

Getting yourself more vocal samples is the key here, as would be a little more variation in the melody (to me, that sounds pretty non-existent in the early going of the piece)

The pace is good, as is the beat. Combining them with something higher pitched and synth based would be the way forward, just to relieve the monotony of the piece. You cna change the melody, while leaving the bass the same. It makes such a difference to the dynamic of the track.

Pauses in the middle, to let people check that they are still alive, before launching off into another tirade is always another good thing to consider in the long run.

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Dj-GST responds:

Yeah, I'll make a melody for it if I do a full mix.

Thanks fir the review.

Not bad, but still needs something

I think that there is huge potential here - the voice needs working on just a little, to make it slightly more ragged and "edgy", just helping to portray Ledger's infamous villain. Ragged breathing in the pauses could help, as could making it ever so slightly deeper, which would help the darker sides of the piece.

With the music, you've got a nice piece there, but I would ask that you turn that down, as it drowns out the vocal work in places and since that's what we want to look at primarily, no offence to the musician, you need to look at that. With the way that the dramatic pause was flanked by the raise in volume. That worked well. Getting there, but it just needs a little more, IMO.

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ForNoReason responds:

Ill keep working on it! Thanks!

Interesting... but not Jazz

With the way that this song has so much form and sounds pre-written, I'd personally say that it wasn't Jazz. From what I've heard, Jazz is the only type of music that you compose as you play through it, there and then. This sounds more like something that you might even dance a Charleston to, which is a completely different piece of music.

Nice, quirky and a very enjoyable listen, but I'd have considered lengthening this piece, combined with making it loop better, since there was an issue with how it pauses for a fraction of a second at the end. Curing that would certainly help.

The balance of the instruments is positive and you've certainly got a good ear for the sounds, but more variation and more in the way of song length would certainly help you here.

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camoshark responds:

Thanks for the review, thought I have to tell you you didn't do your homework, because this most certainely is Jazz!

It's from the archaic branch, though, so I guess there's place for confusion. It's called Dixieland Jazz, and it's what succeeded to ragtime in some way, and it's what lead to Jazz.

You should REALLY learn a bit about Jazz, because my friend got insulted quite a bit by your review stating that his song isn't Jazz while it's very clear you have no idea you have no clue as to what it is yourself. Just thought I'd point that out, it would be a good thing you'd check out a bit of it, it's good for your health!

As for the rest of the review, it's quite evident I'd have to lengthen it up, but you still kind of stated a point by saying part of the song comes from improvisation over a chord progression. Most of the time, it can even become longer than the theme itself! But of course, it isn't really called impro when I write it down, and I'm not that good writing solos for saxes and clarinets!

And finally, Variation... I wasn't really planing on making this a full-fledged song, it was supposed to simply be a pattern for dixie, but I wanted to post it here, so I repeated the theme and added a piano impro to make it sound otherwise.

Thanks for the review!

Cheers,
Samuel Hébert

Shame about the staic

A lovely tune that had just a little too much static on it for me - with the speakers on my laptop and in my headphones, there is quite a "fuzz" to the sounds at the height of the volume that they play at. I've tried turning the volume down here and it just isn't working.

I love the tempo and the fact that you've supported the piano with the strings, giving more balance to the piece, plus it seems such a well developed piece of music that you can rely on other areas rather than just the piano to pull this piece along. I'd suggest that adding a little (but not too much) percussion, just to give it a little breath of fresh air in the middle, towards the end of the tune. Just carry the beat and let the piano explore elsewhere, giving more variation and creativity to the piece as a whole.

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Sawdust responds:

Thanks for the review!

Good sounds

Well, this is certainly a very nice sounding little piece that stirs the soul. You've got a lot of instruments in there and while I'd mess with the balance of the lead guitar, to make it sound a little less of an "echo", almost as if the lead is deep within a cave and the rest aren't, I'd say you're pretty spot on.

You need to find yourself someone that can make some icons for your pieces, as they would look better, being identified with a little album art.

The slower buildup and the light drums gives way spectacularly to a scene where I can see a sword fight taking place and the hero sits there, ready to swing his sword, a few sparks flying off the blades, as they clash and as quick as it was started, the enemy lies vanquished on the floor. The camera pans up to his face in a similar fashion to Final Fantasy.

Moonlight glints off the blade and the scene fades to black, as the hero exits. Awesome.

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tootsie10 responds:

that would be awesomely cool if only some one would put this in a movie of theres, yeah i am messing around with the lead trying defrent things with it to see what sounds good, I really appreciate the input and review! keep'in it real man!

You know, I stopped shaving to think of something to write here. That worked out well.

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