Needs Lyrics
Not a bad tune - a little repetitive, but that can be remedied by the addition of a solo or two, just to break up the monotony of the piece in general. I think that this shows some good skills with the instruments in question. The one solo that you finished on came in well, but was a little too late for my liking - if you had one in the middle of the tune, it will sound much better.
The addition of vocals could be very productive to the song and a little splash of inspiration from something 'out of left field', with a different instrument (Harpsichord?) will certainly keep it moving and give you something else to talk about.
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